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Chapter Two
24 reviewsThe aftermath and consequences of a mistake. Also, a new player joins the scene.
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Emerald Blaze
(#) javacap 2008-03-30
I really like where this is going. Hope you continue it. What is going to hapeen to Mr. Weasley and Felur father?Emerald Blaze
(#) Genericrandom5 2008-03-30
I, too, would like to know where the smut is (=p) but more importantly (...sorta...) is that I'm thrilled to see someone going past the actual event with this concept in something that isn't a oneshot. totally awesome. Keep it up.Emerald Blaze
(#) Genericrandom5 2008-03-30
I, too, would like to know where the smut is (=p) but more importantly (...sorta...) is that I'm thrilled to see someone going past the actual event with this concept in something that isn't a oneshot. totally awesome. Keep it up.Emerald Blaze
(#) HarryGinnyTonks 2008-03-30
smut?
jk its cool
Looks interesting, are all of the girls going to run to Harry to comfort them, as was his master plan!?!!!!??Emerald Blaze
(#) Cateagle 2008-03-30
Hmm, lots of sorting out to be done, here. I don't expect Harry had any "master plan" and I doubt all the girls are going to be running to him immediately, but he is the one guy there who's demonstrated integrity and self-control and I suspect that'll make him seem rather more attractive in the aftermath. He may have made funds available for a small party, but he never, obviously, intended for as much to happen as did happen - I noticed he distanced himself with distaste as things developed. I still think the older men, Mr. Weasley, Mr. Delacour, and, especially, Remus, should've had the possession and self-control to not succumb, but since they did succumb they will be paying a penance, likely for a good while. As for the younger Weasley males, it's going to be an intense and painful learning experience. If I was Bill, I'd suggest suspending the wedding and giving me time to completely re-woo Fleur as a demonstration of my real feelings and I'd suggest the same to my brothers; whether or not that offer would be accepted and how long it'd take would be something else entirely.
Still, this is developing nicely and diverging bit by bit from Tim's take on the same challenge.Emerald Blaze
(#) dennisud 2008-03-30
So far goood! I really like how for once harry is not responsible or is 'TOLD" to be reapsonsible and proven right about him being more of a disgusted spectator than a participant.
Now with Luna in the fold things will surely become even more unique!
dennisud
P.S.- I'm a hughe Hermione and Luna fan as in they share Harry!
;-)Emerald Blaze
(#) Vulkan 2008-03-30
This is nice. I was quite sad that Jeconais had stopped his story. I hope you dont. This has a lot of potential.
You have done a fine job until now. Keep up the good work...Emerald Blaze
(#) sweetgirl 2008-03-30
I'm glad to see the men suffering the consequences for their actions. Remus and Mr. Weasley and Mr. Delacour should have been more responsible especially with someone as young as Ron and Harry there. I am hoping none of the girls take them back especially Hermione and Fluer. I have a feeling that Ron would do it again if he had the chance and Bill tried to pass the blame onto Harry. I wonder how Ginny feels avout her brothers paying a stripper to pose as her and give Harry a lap dance? Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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