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Chapter Two
24 reviewsThe aftermath and consequences of a mistake. Also, a new player joins the scene.
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Emerald Blaze
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-03-30
Harry's character was almost exaggerated in this chapter. Granted, he's loyal, but even he wouldn't try to tell Fleur to give Bill another chance after Bill tried to shift the blame to him. Definitely not.
Looking forward to more.Emerald Blaze
(#) Nautilus 2008-03-31
the plot thickens... its was tooo short for my liking... so i'm waiting for the next chapter, i haven't really got much to 'review'Emerald Blaze
(#) haroon_angel 2008-03-31
Wow Great Work although this Chapters are too Short Mate please make them Longer and add some Smut Soon .... Keep it up and Update soon.
HaroonEmerald Blaze
(#) iamspammer 2008-03-31
Good plot so far. I wish you would hurry it up a bit though. When you say Harry/Many I am assuming all girls go with him. Although I wonder if that'd be a quickie or something permanent. Oh well, wait and see I guess.
I do hope that you don't plan to forgive the boys and make Harry go all guilty and stuff. Boys should deserve what they got. Make Harry good but not saint. Like the way he din't do anything about Bill throwing all blame on him.
I think it might be a good idea to answer the reviews. It shows readers that author infact values their review.
Just MY thoughtsEmerald Blaze
(#) iamspammer 2008-03-31
Good plot so far. I wish you would hurry it up a bit though. When you say Harry/Many I am assuming all girls go with him. Although I wonder if that'd be a quickie or something permanent. Oh well, wait and see I guess.
I do hope that you don't plan to forgive the boys and make Harry go all guilty and stuff. Boys should deserve what they got. Make Harry good but not saint. Like the way he din't do anything about Bill throwing all blame on him.
I think it might be a good idea to answer the reviews. It shows readers that author infact values their review.
Just MY thoughtsEmerald Blaze
(#) jjracer24 2008-04-01
Enjoyed the story so far looking forward to the updates, keep them coming when you get the chanced.Emerald Blaze
(#) Pointer 2008-04-02
Good story.
The ladies aren't upset enough.
I would expect all of them to blow a gasket over the Ginny clone.
In addition to the infidelity of their partners.Emerald Blaze
(#) Vhae 2008-04-03
Its a bit short. If any of the women go to Harry I hope its Tonks, Fleur and Angelina Johnson.
If anybody likes Harry/Angelina Johnson go to fanfiction.net and look up Lessons by kendrawriter.
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