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The Boy Who Vanished
4 reviewsWelcome to the life of Harry. harry lives with his paraniod mother and is about to start his first year of school. Everything is going fine for Harry except the small bit about a powerful dark wiz...
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The Boy Who Vanished
(#) koppe 2008-04-06
Great start, and an interesting twist. The only thing, is that there are some bad spelling - mostly similar sounding words.
So Harry has grown-up knowing he's a wizard and perhaps trained a bit. On the bad side, Voldemort has been rampaging alle that time.
What about Neville? Is he alive? What about his parents? Is he the boy-who-lived (well, survived a confrontation with Voldemort, perhaps)?
Harry seems to retain some memories from the "normal" HP-universe, especially Hermione it seems. Will he befriend her right from the bat - and perhaps not befriend Ron at all (or Ron doesn't want to).
What about the money, titles, lines and so on? After all, he is James' son, and the only(?) living Potter. Will he be able to claim his inheritance/title directly - eg. from the Goblins? Will Dumbledore give some of it back as long as he dance to his pipe?
Will he end-up being "marked" in some way by Voldemort, thus triggering the prophecy?
How will the wizarding-world welcome Harry and Lilly (bastard... gold-digger... but at the same time, a hope to defeat Voldemort and the last surviving of an old line)?
What about Rose... would be fun if Petunia and Vernon had a magical child...
Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
The Boy Who Vanished
(#) Darksnider05 2008-04-07
I like how your story is going but there is one issue I find un real him going to hogwarts from what your saying and even with her reasoning it seems completely out of the blue him going to France for schooling makes sense or even out of the country but him being stuck in hogwarts near the mind reading old shite ablus that does not.Author's response
It might make a little more sense in a few chapters why he is still going to Hogwarts.The Boy Who Vanished
(#) Basilisk1 2011-06-02
Darksnider05 made a point about Harry's schooling, there are at least two other schools of magic out there. Beauxbatons and Durmstrangs, to name them. Of course in the world of fanfiction, we authors are permitted to 'create' any number of other schools elsewhere possibly America??
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