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Emerald Blaze
(#) Aberbadger 2008-04-18
very curious indeed. Nothing wrong with gratuitous sex, but i'm glad to see that there is also some substance to the story. I'm very much looking forward to seeing where you are going with this. Please update soon!!!Emerald Blaze
(#) Fission25 2008-04-19
Great Story!
I've always thought Harry had such a kind and loving heart that he could actually support a sort of Harem. I hope that what's your going for.
It's nice to see a more in-character approach with his kindness. At times it seems so many loose track of that and just make him into an ass.
I hope we have some smut in the coming chapters, but no need to hurry it too much. I've enjoyed seeing another story that has a reason and development for the smut.
Also, seeing the thoughts and feelings of the girls feelings change for Harry might make it interesting and more believable.
Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more.
FissionEmerald Blaze
(#) MrPowell 2008-04-21
Oh dear. It seems that virtually all the guy's are screwed, after well a a bit (or a lot as the case may be) of screwing. wondering where you're going with this and looking forward to finding out.Emerald Blaze
(#) ficbob 2008-04-23
Naked Luna is a great start to this chapter
Now how are you going to continue with that?
Looking forward to moreEmerald Blaze
(#) QundraDraconium 2008-05-20
I like it. Even if it bear's a striking resemblance to Jeconus's story, the unusualness of the plot, and the fact that he made it a one shot makes this a fun new read. I look forward to more.Emerald Blaze
(#) thealphamale 2008-06-01
Jeconais wasn't even the first one to write this type of story, but who cares! You're the first one to make this a full-on story and you haven't updated in over a month! There's nothing worse than when an author starts to write a story then gives up on it, especially without one sex scene!Emerald Blaze
(#) cravensvt 2008-06-11
wonderful plot, and Harry saving the one escort, simply because he would rather talk was a nice touch, I hope you update soon
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