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So Unlike Him...
7 reviews'I don't care if it had killed me, and I don't know what you did that was so bad you had to say that, but honestly, I'd rather that than have to watch Ray drift away...'
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A Light To Burn All The Empires
(#) baublehead66 2008-04-17
What about her drug problems? Wasn't that why Mikey dumped her before? Because of her drug addiction? Was it both the drugs and the pregnancy?
Or am I misinterpreting and a moron?A Light To Burn All The Empires
(#) i-stole-the-cookies 2008-04-18
Were they supposed to married? I thought they were just together...or am i just an idiot? It's probably me.
Oh well it's your story, you can change whatever you want! it's a great story. update soon?
xoxoxA Light To Burn All The Empires
(#) linerlover 2008-04-19
baublehead66:
the drug problems started because of the abuse, her trying to get away from her problems. it was the pregnancy that made her leave. and don't call yourself a moron-- i can see how it would be confusing.
i-stole-the-cookies:
yes they were married, but they never actually got divorced. you are not an idiot, this story is simply incredibly confusing. i was confused at first. and thank you for saying its a good story-- i love knowing that im writing this for people to read.
and to everyone: i will update asap, however if it takes a while, i apologise profusely. in a couple of chapters i am bringing in a new character, with a large part, based on the personality of one of my closest friends. i asked her, and she is writing a monologue-- youll know what i mean when you read it.
jesus, i can ramble for my country, i can. basically, if it takes a bit- dont worry, im not gonna stop updating. mainly cos im enjoying writing it a lot more than i probably should. especially with the upcoming plot.A Light To Burn All The Empires
(#) mychemicalromance 2008-04-26
loved it,a bit confusing but just the same,nice...anyways, i don't think my tiny brain can comprehend with the confusing elements,but i think i finally got it!!!hahaha....anyways,keep writing!!!DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING HERE!!!i'll rot....kidding...
xoxo,
AlixA Light To Burn All The Empires
(#) Sebastien_Is_Hott_ 2008-05-02
okay, I have a problem. None of it seemed confusing to me... Is that a bad thing? Maybe my head's not screwed on right or something but I understood every word. I love this story. It started out good and got better with every chapter! please update soon, cliffhangers suck! lotz of luv, HannahAuthor's response
no its not weird. other people seemed confused, but yeah. i understand it.
ill try. im waiting on a monologue written by a friend.
so yeah, ill try to update asap.
thanks for r&rA Light To Burn All The Empires
(#) x_vampire_angel_x 2008-05-07
i adore this, seriously keep up the (fucking) amazing work
this is in return for the nice comments you left for me on my oneshots
x charli xAuthor's response
thankyouthankyouthankyou.
but seriously-- dont feel obliged to comment on mine just cos i commented yours.
but thanks anyway.
oh and btw, your oneshots are amazing anyway. =]
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