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• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) lycus 2008-04-28

  Excellent chapter, I am really loving this story. but I hope that you don't put harry with ginny at all. and the whole eyes of death thing, will have the whole great hall looking at harry, and I really want to see what katie will discuss with alicia and angelina. but please please keep this story going, you do have a habit of not finishing your stories,especally when they get good.

• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) Cateagle 2008-04-28

  Definitely quite the unique and interesting chapter. I rather enjoyed Hermione's letter home as it sounds so, so much like her. The response from her mother should be rather a classic letter in both societies. :D
  
  I appreciated that a Chaser like Katie would have the perception and mental processing ability to spot those clues and get a fair idea of their meaning. That she knows enough to realize that some actions need to be taken is "icing on the cake", though I wonder what rumors about Harry it will engender.
  
  THe new prophecy was quite the interesting one and I wonder if Dumbles is going to understand it all when he reads a transcription. I doubt he'll make all the connections, yet, but he'll know enough to cause problems if he's a meddlesome or manipulative type in this fic.
  
  I do see the need for Hermione to educate Harry both on his background and on his responsibilities (mind you, I suspect they'll both enjoy some more intimate aspects of the bond at a later date - if their feelings lie that way, I could see Hermione becoming his bondmate rather than "just" a bonded female).

  Author's response

  Would you agree Hermione would do the research needed to find out whats going on or do you think she is too young

• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) jabarber69 2008-04-28

  Well that cleared up alot of questions, but then left us with quite a few more! Damn if you write another chapter then that will be further than I have ever seen you write something!

• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) Coolone007 2008-04-29

  This is a verty great story. Now that katie has an idea of what is happening, eill she be asking for the potter family protection as well? Is this a 'Lord of the Rings' crossover?

• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) Rubel 2008-04-29

  Neat. Good characterization though the spelling and grammar could use a little work. I like the story idea and I can't wait to see where the big divergances start happening. Going by inference Ron is not very close to Harry in this story so will Harry be developing any other close friends? Well I'll definitely be keeping and eye out for this story. Keep up the good work.

  Author's response

  Harry will be closer to Neville and his Teammates then Ron. It is very possible that Ron was a plant by the headmaster in this fic. Whereas Hermione is a wild card. I still not sure what kind of DD this fic has.

• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) Lady_Miz 2008-04-29

  Very original. J'adore. To repeat what's been said, this does need a beta or proofreader but other than that, this is incredible. The execution is marvelous, so the surface and other grammar errors detracts from the whole.

• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) AgentOrange1986 2008-04-29

  Get yourself a beta! There are several spelling errors and such, but...
  
  more importantly: KEEP WRITING. I find myself jumping in joy (or squirming on my chair in public places) when confronted with an update on this.

• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) Rocky235 2008-04-29

  I'm too tired to do an inciteful review. ("too tired" is a code phrase for "too inept".)
  
  I've read several different story chapters today and your's were the most exciting. Not exciting because of stairways into dark basements, battles fought in the road, or Albus's fooling around with Filch, but exciting because I wanted to to know what Hermione was going to do and find out. You've portrayed her in a very favorable light.
  
  Thank you for sharing your work.

• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) hjpngmw 2008-05-29

  Intriguing premise. I'd like to see more. Please get a beta soon or a really good dictionary. Oh, stationary and stationery are not the same thing.
  

• Oaths of Fantasy

  (#) GryffindorDragon 2008-06-01

  Is this abandoned? I don't see anything since April, not even on your website. Too bad, this has a lot of potential. I would recommend that you do more careful proofreading. Even if you have something against using a beta, typos, mispellings and the like tend to detract from the enjoyment of the story.

  Author's response

  No not abandoned. I am working on chapter 4 and 5

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