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The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) misteryman526 2010-05-11
The use of the oaths and contracts to drive the story was certainly interesting but was dragged down by the poor character development. The backstory for Tom Riddle was okay, but the one dimensional portrayals of Dumbledore and Snape were very disappointing.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) TheCodFather 2013-09-24
Well all I can say is AWESOME . Great way to use the Pureblood magic against Riddle and I really loved seeing the gold digging Red headed menaces getting what they deserved and not what the wanted . How can anyone think someone like Hermione would settle for a Troll like Ron or Harry with the ultimate fangirl and school broom Ginny . Finally having someone stand up and return the school to the ideals and ways of the Founders and no longer a breeding ground for the "Greater Good " Thank-you for returning the world to it's even keelThe Acts Of Betrayal
(#) NobleK 2015-12-28
Didn't I review this already? If not, my bad; great story, but parts of the ending suck, mainly due to 'Hurricane Molly'…The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) EdTheBeast 2018-11-01
Once you get past the non-canon; The rapes, and those who like several characters acting non-canon. This is a fantastic story. Congrats. I started writing one and my son said try this site to see if anyone else has your idea. So far some close. This is a must read: from a 56 year old reader!!!!!!The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) Noylj 2022-02-03
Nice ending to both dark dicks.
Let ginny quietly die.
At least she and Ron did something right, when they were both clinically and legally insane.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) EdTheBeast 2022-02-18
A most excellent MUST READ story and adventure! It is a sad, but romantic drama story.
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