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• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) ssa 2008-08-14

  This is a very good story btw im RanmyukaProdigy on fanfic.net i love all your stories

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) drifter 2008-08-20

  "I" think you have written well and that the story is well worth the time to read it.
  
  Having already read "Marriage Contracts", Technomage, "Businessman", and "Distaff Side", I should not have been surprised.
  
  Your ability to take the cannon and find new ways to look age it is what fanfic is all about, but I really liked how you addressed things that really nagged in the cannon: McGongols and Dumbledores blinkers to what they don't what to see; Ron and Hermine's to major obvious opposites: brains, talent, willingness or not to work, etc\; and the fact that Harry and Hermione were a lot closer and more balanced match; AND that that the only reason Harry did not die on a suicide mission with Moldishorts was the Dumbledore died early of a bad case of stupidity.
  
  I loved your your no shots fired, no friends and companions lost ending. I have been fanfic's for a couple years, and think that ending is unique.
  
  Again, thanks for a very enjoyable read.
  
  
  May the MUSES always be with you!!!
  -_^
  

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) fanofkali 2008-11-12

  Excellent story with a very good ending epically how the "Dork Lord" was beaten.

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) keichan2 2008-12-10

  I really liked this story!
  Thanks.
  

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) siledubhghlase 2009-03-27

  Excellent and very imaginative. When Mr. Weasley addressed his family in that first council after Ron and Ginny had been arrested, I actually cried for that poor man. He was heartbroken and his wife was perfectly unrepentant.
  
  I was wondering if overexposure to the control potion might have damaged Ron's and Ginny's minds and I was right. After all, drug abuse destroys the mind, the body, the heart, the soul, and the family.
  
  I was glad to see that in a very brief moment of clarity, Ron sort of redeemed himself. For a bried, shining moment, the training the DA offered him paid off.
  
  I was hoping for the same for Ginny, but no. She was just too far gone. I was glad to see Neville come into his own, too.
  
  BRAVO!!!!

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) kaptin_hippy 2009-04-24

  Truly a supurb story. Great plot line along with terrific writing made this a piece of art. I plan to I've read the rest of your work as soon as possible. Also, I've read Kinsfire's work and it's garbage compared to your's. I personally don't find him "great and powerful".

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) noreenklose 2009-05-13

  Excellent story! I thoroughly enjoyed it from Chapter 1 to the end. Tom's losing his magic, which ended his life, AND all of his DE's going with him, was a masterful stroke!
  
  The ending was wonderful. Thank you for writing. Please continue with your stories--you are a good writer.
  
  KUTGW,
  Noreen

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) kaylee52107 2009-10-07

  I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
  
  
  Thank you,
  
  
  
  Terri

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) spaceodin 2009-10-08

  this story was absolutely amazing! though sad at times

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) garsdal 2009-12-20

  pwned by bubblehead charm. no greater shame.
  
  12 kids....
  thats pushing it, she'll want more next year i presume:D

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