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California Dreaming
(#) Smiley02 2008-05-08
LMAO
A nice room ha I though it was going to be somehting bad
great chapter!Author's response
Thanks. HAHA... I fooled you all... :p
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(#) sky01 2008-05-08
Ha Ha Ha nice twist I also thought it was going to be something bad anyways I love it so far so keep it up, update soon.Author's response
Thanks. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can. :D
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(#) Smiley02 2008-05-09
Now where did you get that idea to change it hmmm I wonder lol unless it was nothing to do with that then nevermind lolAuthor's response
no, you're right... I was going to write a different story, but our convo gave me an awsome exciting idea, so now i'm taking this story down a completly different path. :p
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(#) Smiley02 2008-05-09
oh sweet! Go me! lol jkAuthor's response
lol nice.
I'm thinking of writing some parts of the season 2 episodes down. what do you think?California Dreaming
(#) Smiley02 2008-05-10
uh I don't know I didn't watch much of the second season cause I missed almost all of them just keep it with tiborAuthor's response
ok, i'll wait.California Dreaming
(#) crispycrunch 2008-05-10
damnn yea u got me gud !!! hahahahaaha
B-E-A-UTIFUL! lmaooo =P but yea great chapyer bout tibor, thats a gud idea, using him in ur story TOAO! =)Author's response
Yeah, i've noticed that people aren't putting the new villains in their stories like "Evil eye" (BTW What kind of a name is that?? "Evil eye"... stupid. I hate that guy... "I spy with my eye, an agent in lots of trouble... what's with that? he's creepy. and whats-his-face... Francis or whatever... he's creepy too)____ anyway, si i'm going to incorporate some new people.California Dreaming
(#) crispycrunch 2008-05-11
HAHAHAHAHAHA ur rigth! i hate that guy 2 but i do love that episode ;) ....lmao and yea hahaha "AND FRANSCES!" or sumthin i couldt stpo laughin @ that part hahahahaa.. and when he's like "she's over there!"
hahahahaAuthor's response
ya, francis or whatever is creepy. :D it was funny.
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