- Great chapter mate, now why don't you make the story into a harem one, as I could see that many girls would do almost anything to be with Harry - so why not sharing him?
Oh I do love the books that Harry found. :D
Oh I like that Harry give Hermione an owl.
I like the new wands that Harry and Sirius are going to get.
Oh I hope to see alot of Dumbledore Bashing, as I don't really like him now.
PLEASE update soon.
- Thanks so much dor writting I hope to see more soon. I like that you made up a sceond family for Harry from his mom's side. As for a girl for Harry he is a bit yong at this point for a permanent pairing but I vote for Katie Bell you do not see her used much. Also the wands you made up were cool thanks for writting.
- That was a great chapter, and I hope that you update soon. but I really hope that you skip some of the training so that you get to the story quicker. and as for the girls you might as well make it a harry/harem story and as for the girls angelina and alicia are with the weasleys so how about hermione/fluer/tonks/katie bell and padma patil or su li. and you've already shown that harry and hermione had a relationship by harry giving her her own owl and thinking of her first, and last how far in the future did harry come back from?
- Hey my pairing has to be Harry/fluer, I rather not read a threesome, becuase I dont think a women can share her lover. Plus fluer is the only canon babe who is suitable for harry. Both are rich, beutiful, powerful and come from a respectable family.
I like your harry independent, and who has balls, I like to see dumbeldore bashing, and I hope harry doesn't put up with the same shit he did in the 4th year. Please get rid of ron, all year, he just be jealous of Harry.
(#) Ender_Wiggin 2008-05-12Brilliant job on the wand cores, very original. Definitely love the direction this story is headed. I find it hard to review stories that have just started since it's hard to get a feel for the story, but so far this one looks very promising.
Keep up the great work and thanks for the effort so far.
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