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Bargain and Discovery
16 reviewsThe next chapter of One Man Army! Unexpected events pops up!
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(#) darthridian 2008-08-29
nice story mate i like the concept about the clones, just a little unusual for hp having feelings for his clones, granted opposite sex clones ut still basically the same.
but i will await your next updates as this has the makings of a good story, keep up the good work.
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(#) LadyKnightKeladry 2009-03-11
I think it's interesting. Good story, just a few errors to correct. I didn't really understand the sentence, "He encourage waving off her advice smiling at the current situation as the ‘Ares’ gave several jolts as several turbo laser beams smashed into its shield."One Man Army
(#) chrisguy9017 2010-01-02
I like how the story progressed. I didn't think much of it in the beginning to be honest but now I like it. Ayala is in awesome :). I was wondering if you posted on FF.netOne Man Army
(#) chrisguy9017 2010-01-02
I like how the story progressed. I didn't think much of it in the beginning to be honest but now I like it. Ayala is in awesome :). I was wondering if you posted on FF.net
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