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• One Man Army

  (#) Darksnider05 2008-05-12

  Curious if he will have a friendship with the younger of the two Jedi or a relationship either way things are looking up.

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  (#) fety0101 2008-05-12

  glad you posted new chapter, as good as the others, i can see the foundation for a long but great story, keep up the good work.

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  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-05-12

  I almost would rather he didn't go back to Coruscant, given that the Council will definitely try to control him like a dog when all is said and done. Will look forward to what all goes down with the Jedi, and what trouble Harry will get into next.

• One Man Army

  (#) pooyan 2008-05-12

  good story
  i hope you dont send him to jedi it wil be like Dumbeldor and other controlling him make him a more in balance somebody that use dark and ligh force maybe a sith techer !
  update soon .

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  (#) Grozt 2008-05-12

  Now this was an exiting chapter, and a real surprise to who the Jedi´s where. What role will those to have in the future chapters i wonder.

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  (#) einuom 2008-05-12

  good story. can not wait for the next chapter.

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  (#) bluedevil26 2008-05-17

  like your story so far. I dont think you have to send him to the jedi council since you have him being trained by a jedi master Qalsneek that will make the jedi happy that he isnt going dark.they'll get to see him when he takes his jedi trials.please dont send him back to earth to fast and no ginny that was a mistake in my opinion( crushes have nothing to do with love ) jj

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  (#) 58fury 2008-05-29

  I am very much hoping you will be continuing the story.

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  (#) CG172375 2008-06-18

  Hey wait, whatever happened to Va Je? I can assume that he was dealt with or chased off somehow. But I'm slightly disappointed that we weren't able to see the look on his face when Sabaoth squadron broke off.
  
  Good call about the clone names, by the way. It means you'll have to think up situations in which they'll earn their names... but that's cool. Reminds me of the mandalorians somehow.
  
  As for the Coruscant thing... No idea. If this was a story about Harry finding out he was being manipulated, then it would be fun to see his reaction on realizing he's being manipulated by the Jedi Council. But since we're dealing with Kickass Harry... He'll probably just deal with them in a professional manner- heh, I wouldn't be surprised if he offers to pay the Jedi for training him.
  
  Just thinking ahead: But what the hell happens when Harry returns to Hogwarts? Jeez, does he bring ACC-07 along, Cavik, Bella? I'm betting either the Jedi come (for a limited time: Aayla DOES need to die in Episode 3 :( ) or they go off with a "fare-thee-well" and some obscure Jedi wisdom. Not to mention dealing with Voldemort... or Dumbledore. In any case, I'm hoping you'll get less writer's block and continue the story. You've got quite a lot of fans, haha!
  
  Whoops, just read what pooyan wrote:
  
  Grey Jedi ftw! Someone ala Jolee Bindo or Kyle Katarn... but more on Jolee Bindo. :p
  
  Speaking of Sith Lords: I wonder if Harry's going to encounter Darth Sidious. Haha, might be fun to duel with Darth Maul (assuming he's the right age).
  
  Eagerly awaiting your next update.
  
  --ChaosGhost, The Ghost of Chaos :D

• One Man Army

  (#) Grozt 2008-06-27

  This is getting better and better, ehen is the next chapter coming

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