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Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2008-05-25
Back to your bad habits of short changing us, your readers, with another short chapter. The bits with Snape were funny. He and Tonks seemed almost like children in this chapter. I think you could have gone on a bit and added more to the chapter. Where was Remus during the meeting or the Weasleys? What is the Weasley reaction going to be? When will Sirius will come into this story and what will happen when Harry finally makes his presence known? My last thought when rambling different ideas to you is this. The staff has been done in alot of stories but only one comes to mind when it's shrunk, and I do hope that you shrink it down so as to through Dumbledore and crew off.
Geovanni Luciano
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