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Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) Felur 2008-05-13
I am sorry, but this story is mediocre at best. I would only enjoy it in that case, if your fic was a parody. You use almost all cliches characteristic of the independent!Harry's stories and do not really add anything original.
I understand, that you are upset, but consider, that many (about every third!) comments repeat my opinion. May be we are at least partly right...
Finally it is not a flame. I think, that a negative feedback can also very helpful especially for a novice author.
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(#) thefirebolt1200 2008-05-13
dont listen to the flamers they just like to get under peoples skin. i personally like this story the chapters might be a little short but you make up for it by post once or twice a dayHarry Potter and the New Powers
(#) c3markh 2008-05-13
I agree with badfaith81 you should try to not let flames bother you. It's your story if they don't like it then DON'T READ IT! Thanks for writing.Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) Caliko 2008-05-13
Look, I like the story. You do, however, have it mis categorized. It seems, to me, that you are a NATURAL HUMOR WRITER. Trust me, i've stood where you are at one point. I tried to write something dramatic, angsty even... and I found myself writing about number 18 defrosting her husband, Krillan, with a hairdryer after aliens froze him... (DragonballZ)
there comes a time when we must cheerfully embrace our natural talents, and ignore that which we can't write..
As for me, i'm enjoying the story. It makes me smile, which is always a good thing, right?
~CalikoHarry Potter and the New Powers
(#) teachergirl 2008-05-14
I was surprised that you were so upset by the reviews. I did not read anything that was mean-spirited. Of course your friends tell you your story is wonderful. What do you expect? If all you want is for people to tell you how great you are then don't be writer for free or for pay. If you want to improve your writing, then pay attention to what people who don't know you are saying. They aren't trying to hurt you; they're trying to help you. If you really want to improve your writing, throw away the box of Kleenex and strive to improve.Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) hushpuppy22 2008-05-16
Despite your author's note, I'm taking this fic as a parody. As a parody, the fic is hilarious but if you're actually serious, then there are a number of problems.
Uhm, so keep up the good work?Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) wolfe3 2008-05-16
no,its not the best story ever written.its also obvious this is your first(or almost)attempt at writing fanfiction.no,i don't think i could do much better,nor could most of the readers.take what WE have to say,and try to learn from your(our) mistakes,besides no matter how good (or bad) you are,people will always complain.
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(#) ficbob 2008-05-17
Putting Harry in charge of the Orders base is a fair prank, or at least the start of a great prank
So, what will harry do with this chance at prank greatness?
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