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Syndrome's Lullaby
1 reviewA missing scene that takes place right after "Jack Jack Attack" Syndrome tries to calm down Jack Jack.
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Syndrome's Lullaby
(#) serafina20 2005-07-13
This was a very cute story. I loved all the things Syndorome did to try and calm Jack Jack down. That being said, you need a little work on the formatting and you seem to be missing some punctuation. I'd love to see the story fleshed out a bit more, too (but that's a personal thing). Thanks for sharing.
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