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The Story Of Bob Parr and Buddy Pines
3 reviewsBob Parr: the man who would become Mr. Incredible. Buddy Pine: boy who would become SnydromeThis is their history, from the debut of Mr. Incredible, to the the rejection of "Incrediboy".
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The Story Of Bob Parr and Buddy Pines
(#) RapunzelK 2007-08-15
Interesting theory. Be careful, you have a couple of words misued (ie: "lying", not "laying"). Also, you might want to adjust the formatting because currently, it's a little hard to tell where one paragraph ends and another begins. It's also made the dialogue look a bit cramped.
Otherwise, not bad. :}
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