(#) jabarber69 2008-05-25Hey I thought the ideal for this story and the first chapter were good but Man I got to tell ya, that this second chapter just blows me away! Love the trunk and letter from his mum as well as portrait from sparda. Although I wished you had gone into this training a little bit more. Also I dont think he should of told Mcgonagall...even with that oath. Also why didnt he blow up or get mad when he found out she was his godmother and she didnt try to keep him or anything.
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-05-29Very interesting story here, and am liking the direction it's taking. Will be looking forward to how things work out for Harry now, who he might be friends with this time around, as well as how he might handle all the looniness and whatnot at Hogwarts as it comes up to smack him.
- Another good start. Vary interesting. It seems you have very good ideas, but your follow through seems wanting. It's not been very long since you published this chapter so I didn't file this one under abandoned. I am looking forward to see where you are going with this one.
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