- I love this story, an yet i see trouble from the Purebloods and Fudge sticking his Slimy nose in this. Also I'd like to see the Merchant's end soon.
Author's responseThank you!
Hmm, we'll see. Trouble there will have to be, at some point. Whether they meet Snape will depend on what happens in France, I suppose.
I suppose something does need to be done about Haman Harkness. Exactly what... well, we'll have to see. ;-)
- Another great and outstanding chapter mate, I was starting to wonder if you were going to be updating or not, I'm glad that you have. Now is Harry going to be power, rich among other things??
I too hope that Luna doesn't ever lose her innocence, and the way she acts.
I do like that the three girls are coming to trams with the collars - I'm amazed that they missed wearing them - and calling Harry Master. I like the first kisses. :D
I like how things went with Hermione's parents, great work.
PLEASE don't take as long as before and update soon, as I would like to see what happens next.
- Where the hell has this been hiding?
I just saw this and read all five chapters. One thing that you can fix that always irked me is Harry's physical health. he's been underfed, Had his head used as a pot holder by Petunia, fireplace poker caught with his arm... You get my drift.
If you decide to send them all to France I'd get the healers (in France) to do a complete workup on Harry and when Dumbles says he has to go to HoggyWartty release the results of the medical evaluation to the Prophet and hang Dumbles and Snape from the get go.
Damn... Is Ch 6 ready yet? I want SMORES!!!
Author's responseThank you very much!
Hmm... I don't see how anything that happens before Harry goes to Hogwarts could directly affect Snape, but Dumbles, yes, I suppose that could be a possibility. (And I suppose that if Dumbles goes, somebody might notice that Snape hasn't been charged for his activities under Voldie.)
Mind, in this 'verse, Dumbles is more thoughtless than evil. Not that it makes a great deal of difference, sometimes.
I'm afraid Ch. 6 might be a while. I'm in grad school, and it's hard to write fic very quickly. Especially longer fics, like this one.
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