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• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) Cateagle 2014-05-18

  Oh, course, it couldn't be that simple for them, when is it ever for Harry. In the meantime, things seem to be going as well as possible for Astoria and we can hope she recovers in all ways. It continues to be most interesting to see how matters progress.

  Author's response

  Thank you for commenting!
  Hope you like the next chapter too!

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) ibskib 2014-05-19

  I noticed a few missing pronouns, you should probably look through it again, and perhaps something to watch out for in the future.

  Author's response

  Thank you!
  I'll try to fix that and be alert to it in the future!

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) PhDMatt 2014-05-19

  Nice job on this chapter. I should have predicted that the ritual wouldn't work so that they would have to try to petition the goddess....but somehow that little twist was more surprising than it should have been.
  Thanks loads for your hard work on this.... Looking forward to the next installment.

  Author's response

  Thank you for your comments!
  I'm glad the twist surprised you and that you are looking forward to more.

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) firelord 2014-05-21

  thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update as life allows

  Author's response

  Thank you for commenting! I will. :)

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) wolfgang108 2014-05-25

  Would be interesting if Hermonie was at the gathering and was drawn in to an active member of the event, but this doesn't seem like that type of fic. Please don't let Astoria get off too easily. Thanks for sharing.

  Author's response

  Thank you for commenting!
  No Hermione won't actively participate. If enough people request it before the chapter is finished I may have her there to watch though. It didn't strike me as her type of gathering but I guess she might consider an exercise in Anthropology or something.
  As for Astoria you'll have to wait and see what happens to her. :)

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) SteveC6023_23 2014-05-31

  I just found this story today (31 May 14) and have enjoyed it quite a bit.
  
  It's an interesting take on 'inter-house bonding'.
  
  I like the way the characters have developed as the story has progressed.
  
  It read quite smoothly but perhaps (says the guy who's never published anything but an honor's thesis for college graduation requirements) a bit of kibitzing with another author or an experienced editor may bring it that much nearer to ready to publish a wider venue.
  
  Much thanks for sharing your hard work and love of HP fanfiction.
  
  Best regards,
  
  SteveC.

  Author's response

  Thank you for commenting!
  If you want to message me to chat about the story or writing in general I'd be happy to do that.

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