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17 ReviewsHe was dead.
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Anatomy
(#) GunSlingerGirl 2007-05-05 09:33:09 PM
Okay. That was excellent. But I am now confused as to whether or not the story's finished??? Otherwise, this is brilliant as per usual :D -
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(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-05-06 02:23:24 PM
Wait. Was that it? Ugh, you're confusing me. There better be more. Or, I might have to kill someone.
...but, holy shit. Lincoln bit Gerard, and left a little 'present'? Hol-ly SHIT!!!! I wasn't expecting that. I wasn't expecting Gerard to be such an idiot. ...but guilt is a human emotion, and I guess Gee's just human (a human whose been thrust into a world of vampires and destinies, but a human nonetheless) Oh, man. I love this story so much.
You really write better than you think you do, hunny. Honestly. You write extremely well even at your worst, and I'm not trying to be nice right there. I'm completely serious.
But, yeah. There better be more. Or I might have to bring new meaning to my nickname of AK-47. But, yeah. Great job! -
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(#) wtfwhore 2007-05-07 04:48:33 AM
I was alittle confused in the beginning.
but i got it, and i loved it.
So....unexpected when Gerard got bite, i thought i was going to shed a tear,thank god i didn't i'm in computer class right now, and that would look a little strange.
Anyways your writing is great,
I love your story.
Please update soon.
Peace;] -
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(#) juniper137 2007-05-07 01:50:42 PM
um...
I'm not accepting this as the end. Loved this story, didn't like this chapter much.
More? puppy dog eyes I totally feel for you, and applaud you for sticking it out and not giving up on this story when so many other people would've.
But could you please possibly post like an outline, or something, that just discusses plot points?? maybe?...please? because then we'd know what the "present" is that Lincoln left (enzyme? Red Death?) and if Gee lives, and if Frank survives, and if Frank goes all "Bird" on their vampire asses and burns them all down, and if Ray turns, and if he harms Bob and Brian in the process, and if THEY survive, and what do they tell Alicia???!! And if Frank manages to cut down Lincoln, won't Gerard be saved?? WHOA. Brain is buzzing. Did I mention PLEASE yet? (please)
It's possible you don't have the answers to these questions even figured out yet...but I figure it's your story, and you'd know better than anyone...you know, just put it out there, for closure (my closure, specifically).
Okay, er, no pressure or anything like that. I hope this doesn't sound selfish...it's just i really loved this story. You are such an incredible writer! And this story in its entirety is so original, and well written, it just connected with me really well, i guess.
In short: good freaking job.
p.s.
about that outline thing...please?! -
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(#) juniper137 2007-05-07 01:50:55 PM
um...
I'm not accepting this as the end. Loved this story, didn't like this chapter much.
More? puppy dog eyes I totally feel for you, and applaud you for sticking it out and not giving up on this story when so many other people would've.
But could you please possibly post like an outline, or something, that just discusses plot points?? maybe?...please? because then we'd know what the "present" is that Lincoln left (enzyme? Red Death?) and if Gee lives, and if Frank survives, and if Frank goes all "Bird" on their vampire asses and burns them all down, and if Ray turns, and if he harms Bob and Brian in the process, and if THEY survive, and what do they tell Alicia???!! And if Frank manages to cut down Lincoln, won't Gerard be saved?? WHOA. Brain is buzzing. Did I mention PLEASE yet? (please)
It's possible you don't have the answers to these questions even figured out yet...but I figure it's your story, and you'd know better than anyone...you know, just put it out there, for closure (my closure, specifically).
Okay, er, no pressure or anything like that. I hope this doesn't sound selfish...it's just i really loved this story. You are such an incredible writer! And this story in its entirety is so original, and well written, it just connected with me really well, i guess.
In short: good freaking job.
p.s.
about that outline thing...please?! -
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(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-05-07 05:48:47 PM
Oh. Oh, I...I can't...oh. draws in shaky breath I thought...oh. Oh-ho-oh.
I can't form a good comment for that ending. I just...can't. Oh. That's all I'm able to say. My sister wanted to tell me something, but I had to hold up a hand to stop her while I hyperventilated. I'm. Not. Lying.
I seriously hyperventilated. Which wasn't fun. Lincoln killed Gerard, Frank killed Lincoln, and now Gerard's back alive. It was happy. A happy ending.
Oh, man. This is probably the least coherent review I've ever left, but sweet Lord God of the world...this story had left me speechless. I finished the ending seven minutes ago, and started this review two minutes ago. It took five minutes to regain my, like, consciousness. I seriously gaped at the screen for that long.
And then my bank called and I had to answer in the middle of reading this. You should've heard the conversation:
Me: HELLO??????
Stupid Telemarketer: Um...can I speak to Marisol? (My mom's name.)
Me: NO!!!!!!
ST: ...uh, does she have a husband I can speak to?
Me: Wha-NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
ST: Could I call at a better time?
Me: YES!!!!! frustrated half-yell
ST: D-do you know when that would be?
Me: NO!!!! /GOODBYE/!!!!!!! hang up and run back to computer as fast as I could
Not kidding. I don't I would be able to make something like that up, but man...I scared the shit out of some random bank lady.
That's what you do to me. This is officially my all-time favorite story, BTW. And I've read a lot. I love you, hunny. I really do. Great job. I applaud you.Author's response
Wow. Thanks dear, your comment made my entire month. And man, I wish I could have heard that phone call! xo -
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(#) isuckatlifen 2007-05-07 08:10:01 PM
this story started out intense with a confusing romance between gerard and frank they werent really sure what they wanted. then there was all the metaphores and how the charectors had to each figure out their roll especially frank at first it was hid roll with gerard but then it got deeper when they went to tour in europe. and he had to figure out what he was supposed to do to save the world. this whole story was like the climax of a book. it was so well written that it doesnt seem like a fanfiction but like a published book. i felt like i was there experencing the whole thing every raw emotion every ounce of pain. i could see the surroundings feel them even. it was incredible. sometimes i got so into it i would have an astma attack almost and have to llok around and make sure i was still safe in my room. every word was filled with detail every sentance a story in itself. from begining to end it was incredible. and then at the end when gerard was dead. i was hurt as much as frankie, then god. im atheist and now im starting to doubt my beliefes. the most incredible story i have ever read this is the longest review i have ever written and it still doesnt seem long enough to describe how i felt about this story. it will be on my mind for years. you are the best author i have ever had the pleasure to read a peice from better than any formally published stories. i look foward to reading more of your incredible work.this story made me wonder and think beyond my mind it was truly amazing. i loved it.
nikki xoAuthor's response
Jeez, dear lord woman, I could not have asked for a more heart-felt review. I appreciate this so much, I don't even thing you know. I'm very very happy that I was able to place such an effect on you. I hope you keep reading, and much love -xo -
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(#) GunSlingerGirl 2007-05-08 12:40:43 AM
F*CK. i love you. i love your writing. that was brilliant. i cannot believe it. i think i read it so fast wanting to know what happened i didn't quite get all of it. but i do that with all your stories. i cannot begin to explain how amazing this story is. i really can't. i think with your permission i should like to print it off and make it all book-like. as a once off. maybe i'll make 2 and send one to you??? i dunno. it would be a small token of gratitude for this. IT IS EXCELLENT.
this story...makes my head spin. makes me short of breath. truly it does. you are amazing and i should hope to see an actual book published later maybe? i really hope so :D
thank you again. -
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(#) betterwithapen 2007-05-08 11:32:58 AM
really really good, I'm guessing that was the end?