- Almost last sentence:
[Quote]Harry Potter, you are charged with casting the Cruciatus Curse on Lucius Malfoy, a crime that carries with it a sentence of a lifetime imprisonment in Azkaban Prison. How do you plea?"
Don't you mean Bellatrix there not Lucius. He's just been found not guilty of the one at Lucius. Also,. just before that, you're missing the 'd' off accused I think.
Author's responseGood job on catching the "d" in "accused" typo, I copied and pasted it four more times, and had to replace them all. Thanks!
As for the Bellatrix Lestrang/Lucius Malfoy issue, let's just say that yes, Amelia Bones meant to say "Belatrix Lestrange" and leave it at that.
- Funny I cant wait to see more of it
Author's responseI posted chapter two on Caer Azkaban. It's up for discussion there. I'll edit it, clean it up and post it here in a day or two.
I'm still looking for a Beta for this story, though, so if I can find one before that, then I'll pass it on to him, and then it would be up to him when I get it back.
(#) FenrisWolf 2008-06-26Harry: "Not Guilty, Your Honors."
"On what grounds?"
"On the grounds that it is on record that I was found not guilty due to technical reasons for casting the curse on Lucius Malfoy, and that there is only a single casting recorded on my wand. If I cast it on Mister Malfoy, how could I have cast it on Bellatrix?"
- Oh this is going to be...well not epic. But awesomely funny. Thats epic within itself though...
So I guess this is after the war? After Harry uses Unforgivables hundreds of times against Voldie and his Death Eater armies?
Author's responseHuh? No, it's right after the fiasco in the Department of Mysteries.
Says Post-OotP in the summary.
But I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it so far.
- oh i do love a snarky!harry fic:) this one is shaping up quite nicely so far and I'm eager to see how he confounds everyone this time!
Author's responseI'm sorrym the author review replies system here on FicWad fails to note anywhere which story you are reviewing. All ths stories I posted here on FicWad, save "His Equal" which seems to have mysteriously disappeared no sooner than I uploaded it, feature a snarky! Harry, and nearly all the other HP stories I ever wrote are the same, so I don't know to which story you are reffering. Nevertheless, I appreaciate your comments, and if you are reffering to "The Trial", then please let me appologise for the delay, my Beta went on an extended 4th of July vacation, and when she returned, her computer OS suffered a major breakdown, she's running Winmdows on a mac and so she can't even get supprt for it, and to top it all, she got a malevolent, viceous virus, and still ahsn't been able to do anything about it.
So it might take a time yet for the rest of the story to get out.
My apologies again.
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