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  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-06-28

  Very good, and a lot happening here. Dissappointed to see Remus acting just as bad as Albus here, and will be curious to see what would go down next with the Order. Liked Harry and Hermione's interactions, and hope that the two of them will be able to take the next step before the Order catches up to them, as well as what all might happen when others not in the know find out some of the not so legitimate stuff the Order has been up to.

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  (#) jump_jives 2008-06-28

  I was starting to wonder if this story had been 'abandoned.' I am glad it was not.
  
  This was a good chapter though I would have liked to see more details in the 'fight' scene. So far I like Hermione and Harry's interaction and its nice to see a story where their relationship is evolving and not just suddenly changing into something it wasn't before. That is not to say that this isn't changing quicker than I would expect, but that can be reasonably attributed to them being away from the influence of others.
  
  It will be interesting to see their reaction when they learn the depth of betrayal from Molly, Ginny and Ron. I am also interested in seeing the other Weasley's reactions. I'm also curious how Neville will take to Ginny suddenly attaching herself to him.
  
  Please keep up the story.
  

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  (#) Cateagle 2008-06-28

  -chuckle- I love the way things are developing between Harry & Hermione and I've no doubt tha,t by the time they meet up again with the Warlocks, Hermione will have properly "taken care of" Harry and the two will be a couple. It's quite interesting to see how even a "simple" trip develops complications and that they now have Dark Creature Hunter licenses as well as a new trunk with very "interesting" accessories. There are some interesting ideas here, such as the memory strand duplication that sound quite plausible; I suspect the only reason it's not been tried before is that it's based on "muggle knowledge" (which is as big a stumbling block for the magical world as "Jewish science" was for the Third Reich).
  
  I'll admit to being rather disappointed in the members of the Order's governing council as well as in Ron & Ginny. I daresay that it's going to be interesting to see what happens when the depths of betrayal there are found. I suspect it's not going to be a pretty sight. Too, I applaud Augusta Longbottom for her protections of Neville; I suspect things are going to get quite interesting on that front, too, with Ginny now aiming at him instead of Harry. When they find out about all the betrayals, including both Minerva and Remus, I could see Harry & Hermione transferring to Beauxbatons rather quickly, or using that more powerful time turner to finish their education and take their NEWTS early.

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  (#) Snowdove30 2008-06-28

  Good story. I must confess I am VERY,VERY disappointed in Remus and the Order's inner council. They should all be left for greyback to find and then killed. The level of manipulation directed at Harry is sickening. Always knew Molly, ron, and ginny were no good. Can't wait until Harry and Hermione find out about the potions being given to them and the councils doing. I'm thrilled that HHr are together and getting closer. I hope that after using the time turner, they go ahead and take their NEWTS (maybe in another country) early to get out from Dumbledor's manipulations.

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  (#) tumshie1960 2008-06-29

  Excellent and original story, I really enjoyed your update and was sad I was too late to rate it. First class

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  (#) kurotatsu72 2008-06-29

  This is a very interesting story. One thing that strikes me; now that they have a technique for duplicating Harry's memories, will they try to sell Harry's Parseltongue abilities to the goblins? From what the goblin said, they could almost write their own ticket for that. Keep up the good work!

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  (#) Vanir 2008-06-29

  Once again, i find myself in full agreement with the above. This is a very novel concept, while not quite unique. I really enjoy the fact that they haven't shagged yet. It's credible. Well, i could go on here for a while, but as usual, Cateagle has said it best, as he is wont to do:).
  
  Thanks, and keep it up.
  
  Vanir

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  (#) MonCappy 2008-06-29

  “Oh say 300 euros.”
  
  The Euro wasn't yet introduced in 1997.

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  (#) dennisud 2008-06-29

  First great plot to get harry his "rest" from the magical community and allows Harry & hermione to hook up.
  
  I see you've subverted the OoTP to be Albus's puppetts and Remus of all people his agent.
  
  Well I cans see things starting to fall into place.
  
  Please update when you can!
  
  dennisud

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  (#) Cibbler 2008-06-29

  Remus as the bad guy eh. Not seen that often. And now they are after Neville. Poor kid.
  I really like the Hermione/Harry interaction here. Good story.

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