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Chapter 2
19 reviewsJames was always one to look out for his sons best interests. So what does he do for Harry, well in a word? Veela. Oh and he wanted to make Sirius really jealous. Based off of FFML Tim's, But Lily ...
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But Lily, what about the Veela!
(#) Nekoranmakun 2008-07-23
Good story so far, and I agree with a lot of the reviews ahead of me. The only thing I want to add is that I think Hermione would make a better Ravenclaw than Gryfindor, and considering she knows that she already has a friend in Harry, she might go to that house seeing as she has a friend that doesn't mind that she's a bookworm. Anyway, keep up the good work.But Lily, what about the Veela!
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-07-23
Hmm, I can see Hermione going to Ravenclaw in this AU, as she knows Harry won't be there, and he's a friend now, she won't be trying to be in his house, and if she gets into Raven house, then she most likely won't have near the problems with Ron and the Slytherins as she would in Griff house. Will be fun to see what happens when Albus is expecting Harry to show up, and then tries to pull the card of him listing him in Hogwarts rolls, even though he only assumed, not actually saw the letter. Lemons are fine if tastefully done, but fade to black is no problem for me either, so go with what you feel comfortable with in the end.But Lily, what about the Veela!
(#) druikin 2008-07-24
I'll copy c3markh's post and make my comments ^^
Should this story contain lemons (or should it be more of a fade to black scene)?
Lemons PleaseBut Lily, what about the Veela!
(#) lordblack 2008-07-24
I love it! Its really great, can't wait to see where it goes.But Lily, what about the Veela!
(#) randy21tx 2008-07-24
great story i always like Harry/Fleur fics cant wait till next chBut Lily, what about the Veela!
(#) kjd 2008-07-26
Should this story contain lemons (or should it be more of a fade to black scene)?
if you can write them then i say you should include them (outtakes if people have problems with it, or just include a notice of where it starts and where it finishes for those whio do not want to read lemons) from what ive read of your work so far you should be able to write them.
When should their relationship go to another level? (IE, How far and when?) how far would you expect people to go in reality, not exactly agreeable if harry is 12 when they go further than a snog or 2, 15 maybe go further than that maybe just before harry turns 15 but id say it might be pushing it then for some people.
What do you consider over powered Harry? able to beat everything with little or no challenge, im fine with a powerfull harry (stronger than dumbles as he is getting on in his years, maybe a few abilities (multiple animagus, elemental are a couple ive read before that if reasoned out properly work well mostly) depends upon how you want harry to apear.
if harry can beat anyone with just 1 spell, or a flick of his wrist then deffonately overpowered IMO
What do you think should happen at Beauxbatons during the school years (1st, 2nd, and 3rd)?
Beauxbatons:- not sure 3rd year could follow cannon slightly by having extra security added if sirius escapes azkaban in your story,
im sure that if you continue how you have been then you should have a good story
(Hogwarts should mainly follow cannon with a few changes thrown in the mix like dumbles saving the stone, noone being found out of bed to deliver a dragon from hagrids hut to charlie and his friends, maybe extracts such as mentions of a troll being let into the school in 1 of hermiones letters to harry keeping him upto date on what is happening there)
keep writing and ill keep reading until its finished =]
kjdBut Lily, what about the Veela!
(#) yumago 2009-01-27
Should this story contain lemons (or should it be more of a fade to black scene)? Yes, the story should have lemons.
When should their relationship go to another level? (IE, How far and when?) Well, since you already have them kissing, for "light petting" I think maybe 2nd or 3rd year, for "heavy petting" I don't think you should do that until at LEAST Harry's third or fourth year, any younger than that is just a little odd. I leave it up to you for after that however.
What do you consider over powered Harry? An over powered Harry is a Harry that walks into a room and everybody dies in 30 seconds. He should still be able to get injured, but for the most part (particularly in his younger years) to fight Death Eaters he should have some trouble for awhile, and then when he's older he gets the strength to fight Voldemort.
What do you think should happen at Beauxbatons during the school years (1st, 2nd, and 3rd)? I don't particularly want to see one thing or the other, surprise me! :D
Good story! Can't wait for the rest! Cheers.
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