Categories > Books > Harry Potter > The Power
(#) Dark_Pheniox85 2006-02-28Nicely done with the stone.
Will the stone contain any knowledge as well since harry had a headache when it mergerd.
Is harry going to get the Potter Vault and learn on his own.
Will he meet the Flamel during the summer holiday
Author\'s Response: Where did you get that impression?
(#) Shobs 2006-03-01Seemed to be following Cannon a bit too closely these last few chapters, I'm glad to see something differ (not that it hasn't changed, but I've read many AU PS stories. It gets rather daunting after a while. I'm not exactly pleased with how you ended that, though. How evil of you! Cliffhangers might keep the reader interested but they are a most cruel thing to do! How will the stone being absorbed effect things?
An enjoyable chapter. ^_^
A few little things: "Hermione was also [very worried] about Voldemort. After Harry had told her about the unicorns Hagrid had mentioned, Hermione became [very worried]." The repeated use isn't all that pleasant. Maybe cutting out the "very worried" the first time and leaving it for the second. (yeah, that's the end of my "concerns")
I loved this line: Hermione sighed. "Trust you to save the world out of spite. Fine, I'll go with you."
Amusing. ^_^ I look forward to reading more!
Author\'s Response: I know how cruel cliffhangers can be, and I'm sorry. It just seemed like too good a place to end the chapter to pass up. Thanks for the critique on my [very worried] repeating. Now that I read it, I can see that it doesn't look very good, and I'm going to have to change it. As always, thank you for the review.
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-07-21Very good chapter.
(#) juanjoseso 2009-11-22that's the power that it it's from the title
(#) twistyguru 2010-05-11nice!
I like that the stone sinks itself into Harry--I'm certain that will come into play in future chapters.
Just found this fic, and am enjoying it immensely.
Smart!Harry is SUCH a pleasure to write, especially since he's scraped off Ronnikins.
(#) schuster333 2019-07-14Please, not another fainting Harry. Seems many people who read fanfic are dissatisfied with the Canon pairings and, especially Herm's inexplicable infatuation with boorish Ron. I'm hoping your Hermione changes soon.
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