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• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-08-14

  Yay!!! We can review!!
  
  I loved it and can start to see the chemistry between Bob and Jill. I love Frankie taking the roll of the matchmaker.
  
  I always get excitd when I see an update.
  
  Looking forward to more!!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much.
  I messed up a few times in that chapter - spelling and i repeated myself a few times so i'm sorry about that.

• Deadlines

  (#) moviemaniac888 2008-08-14

  I agree with Moonshyne...Frankie as matchmaker = amazing.
  
  I really liked this update. again I will say I love how you develop the relationships between the characters.
  
  great writing as always.
  
  please update soon! : )

  Author's response

  Wow thank you, i know this story is kind of moving slow but i'm so pleased you guys are liking the way the characters are developing. I'm trying to get even the smallest bit of the real them in the way i write them. Thanks for reviewing :)

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-08-14

  I LOVED IT....MORE!

  Author's response

  Thank you, glad you are enjoying the story. I'm so slow at updating because my updates tend to be so long. I'll try my best though.

• Deadlines

  (#) frankiegrhey 2008-08-14

  AWWWH.
  I love the fact that you made Frank really sweet and funny. And like a five year old. =P
  Ohhh and sexay time. Bob is getting confidence and like hitting on Jill.
  Its hot.
  I love it.
  PLEASE UPDATE.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much and i'm so pleased you are enjoying the story.
  
  I can't help but write Frank like that, i just picture him to be a really friendly and trusting guy with a heart of gold.
  
  I see Bob as being really private and not giving too much of himself away. There's loads of drama to come :)
  
  I will try to update asap

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-08-15

  no need to be nervous!
  great update!
  
  i'm glad that we are getting more of an insight into Jill.
  
  i love Frankie's personality in this story, but i imagine him to be like that in real life also!
  
  thanks so much!
  
  keep em coming!

  Author's response

  I'm so sorry i keep getting so nervous when i post, i never imagined people would read it never mind review it and it's so amazing when people do.
  
  I love writing Frank,

• Deadlines

  (#) cupcakeloserrainbow 2008-08-16

  Gosh! i love this story sooo much!!! I'm always so happy when you post a new chap!! This has got to be my fav chap so far!!!

  Author's response

  I love your name - so cool
  
  Thanks so much for taking the time to review and i'm so pleased you are enjoying my story.

• Deadlines

  (#) disturbedangel6 2008-08-16

  lmao!
  its so funnnny!
  i love it
  update soon!
  
  xx

  Author's response

  Thank you so much. I'm glad i can make you laugh. I'm going on holiday for a bit so i'm hoping to post a chapter before i go. I've already written a fair bit for future chapters so i will have plenty to post when i get back.

• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-08-19

  I love this story. I totally agree with the above comments, the conversation is so funny especially between Frank and Gerard.
  
  I also really like all the other threads in the story like Ruth and Justin, jill's personal history, frank trying to get them together and mikey's problems.
  
  So good Neve - have a nice holiday

  Author's response

  Look the chapter turned green - OMG i am so happy. This had made my day.
  
  Thanks moonpig once again for leaving such a nice review. I;ve got such a boast from everyone. You should see some of the things i've written - Jill on the tour bus - he he.
  
  Thank you for saying you liked the sub plots too. I might be taking on too much but it all links together eventually.

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