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Things are finaly looking up for Gerard, or are they? As things become more complcated, he realises things aren't exactally what they should be. Is he loosing his mind all over again? Is the blonde...
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But I can fix you!
(#) Sassy 2008-08-20
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! :D It's so much fun, easy to read, so easy to picture!
I really want to know who or what the mysterious figure is and blond Gerard has really grown on me! He's fun!
More soon please!! :D
Sas xAuthor's response
You're probably the only one that has asked about the mysterious figure. Next chapter you'll see him again.
And don't worry, you'll know soon enough. Yes, he is fun and hold that feeling, because blondy is my hero at the moment, lol.
Hope you enjoy :)But I can fix you!
(#) waycrazy25 2008-08-20
Aww poor blond gee he gets the pain, he did start it I guess
And
Frankie is so cute the way he was impressed with Gerards fighting skills X]
Now I need more frerard! Now that they've both realised what's happened
You know what's scary is I'm starting to think like you and totally calling what happens next o__0
Update now!!!!
the days are too long!!!
XDAuthor's response
Yes he did, I just thought that I couldn't let him get away with everything, so he got some back. Ha ha.
Oh you are hey? Well, do tell, what do you think is going to happen next? I don't even think I know, LOL!
And yes, I know, I know, there will be plenty of Ferard soon, but naturally I'm going to destroy everything first :(
I know, I suck.But I can fix you!
(#) catlover070904 2008-08-20
Brilliant story, I love your style of writing.Author's response
Thanks so much and thanks for taking the ttime to review. Hope you continue to enjoy it.But I can fix you!
(#) ferardxXxgerarnk_tc 2008-08-20
aw everytime frank and gerard talk it goes from telling eachother a brief description of what happened, things getting awkward and then a random saying xD
it's adorable
but i wish they would just be open to each other and make things sooo much easier
great update though
the way you write is like a drug
it's so addicting
please update soonAuthor's response
Yes it does. I'm sorry, you'll hate me for this chapter to then. I promise they will talk again soon.
I'll have them tied to chairs or something, so they can't get away.
See, you've learn something and you taught it to yourself. Life is easier when you just say what's on your mind. lol.
Thanks for the review, you really made my day with that one, for real xxBut I can fix you!
(#) RippedIntoPieces 2008-08-21
I'M BACK!
My holiday sucked, my stuff got nicked and I lost my notebook. I'm a Maximum Ride FF writer so I was upset about that.
Anyway, great chapters, it seems to get weirder as time goes on. I agree with Gee, I hate golf too, golf playing pirates more so. Although I do like Blonde Gerard.
2 things (sorry I'm really fussy/ocd): mikey's wife is called Alicia not Alisha and lose has one o.
I'm sorry, I'm a spelling freak, feel free to yell at me for criticism.
Awesome storyAuthor's response
WHAT WHAT WHAT? That's not a very good holiday, go back and do it again. LOL! I'm sorry to hear all that shit happened to you though.
Ha ha, yes they do suck, I think Gerard is just a little exhausted.
Ack, and no, fussiness is good, I will keep an eye on the spelling of her name, I thought hers was right and I was spelling Jamia's wrong, but I dunno. Why do they all have to have weird names?
And must have missed that one in spell check. I'm the worst speller in the world, so 2 eras is good for me :D
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