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Untold Paradox
(#) clutsy_93 2008-09-01
WOW.
Awesome, I so wasn't expecting that.
and then she got shot.
I was like oh my god.
Update Soon please and can't wait for more.
(: x.
SamanthaAuthor's response
I had a whole other ending planned out and I was writing it when I thought of that.
Bet your pleased, or else Mikey would of died =OUntold Paradox
(#) Moonshyne 2008-09-01
Hi there Dondon,
I loved it and actually when James got the phone call I thought it was Alicia.
But it was great that she got back at Cassie and wants to make a go at being a family.
Great job
Author's response
Hey Moonshyne,
I thought you might have a sneaky sucspicion that Aicia would be back as seen as Cassie was.
I think I will post and update maybe see how the family is getting on, if they are getting on.
Im working on a new story right now, will be much more organised.
Thanks again for all your reviews
Dondon xUntold Paradox
(#) llamallicious 2008-09-20
I love it. Ignore the fuckers who tell you otherwise. YOu definitely have talent. Especially with twists and suprises. =)Author's response
Thank you so much!!
This review made my day, Thank you so much for your kind review.
:D
Dondon xo.
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