Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Untold Paradox
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- Untold Paradox- (#) clutsy_93 2008-09-01WOW.
 Awesome, I so wasn't expecting that.
 and then she got shot.
 I was like oh my god.
 Update Soon please and can't wait for more.
 
 (: x.
 Samantha- Author's responseI had a whole other ending planned out and I was writing it when I thought of that.
 
 Bet your pleased, or else Mikey would of died =O
- Untold Paradox- (#) Moonshyne 2008-09-01Hi there Dondon,
 
 I loved it and actually when James got the phone call I thought it was Alicia.
 
 But it was great that she got back at Cassie and wants to make a go at being a family.
 
 Great job
 - Author's responseHey Moonshyne,
 
 I thought you might have a sneaky sucspicion that Aicia would be back as seen as Cassie was.
 
 I think I will post and update maybe see how the family is getting on, if they are getting on.
 
 Im working on a new story right now, will be much more organised.
 
 Thanks again for all your reviews
 
 Dondon x
- Untold Paradox- (#) llamallicious 2008-09-20I love it. Ignore the fuckers who tell you otherwise. YOu definitely have talent. Especially with twists and suprises. =)- Author's responseThank you so much!!
 
 This review made my day, Thank you so much for your kind review.
 
 :D
 
 Dondon xo.
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