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• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) hordac85 2008-09-11

  Excellent.Keep it up.

• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) hordac85 2008-09-11

  Excellent.keep it up.

• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) rowinr 2008-09-11

  Great so far cant wait to see your upcomeing chapters.

• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) Cateagle 2008-09-11

  Quite a good and interesting story, let down solely by homonym problems and some typos that jar. I'd humbly recommend a good beta to help with that.

• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) vasilis01 2008-09-12

  Excellent story so far. I can't wait to read more. And try to find a beta.

• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) Dragen 2008-09-12

  Another great chapter mate, like extra memory mate. Great extra chapter... I like the meeting of Voldy and Hunter.
  
  Can't wait for the nexy chapter, update soon.

• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) lycus 2008-09-12

  That was great, and I loved the interaction between Hunter and June. I can't wait for the next chapter, and Hermiones reaction to the man of her dreams showing up again.but then again when Molly shows up and tells everyone about what happened and mentions Hunters name they will realise that Hermione knows Hunter. And I hope that Hermione has the good sence to get with Hunter.

• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) GDragon 2008-09-12

  still lovin it!
  keep it up
  cheers!

• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) jimmyjrc10 2008-09-13

  I love this fic is exelente, see you

• King of Bandit:: Skye: Reloaded

  (#) toranosuke 2008-09-13

  Three meetings with DE's in a single day? That doesn't seem very likely and the whole teaching at Hogwarts bit is also extremely rushed.
  
  I've noticed a number of spelling errors so maybe you should proofread before posting or get a beta.
  
  Overall I do like the basic premise and style of this story and can't wait to see where it goes but it does need some polish.

  Author's response

  ;) I know what you mean by the teaching bit, but Dumbledore had heard what he did in Hogsmead, and has no time to continue teaching himself, plus having someone with his skills will keep the students safer.
  
  As for the spellings, ext: I've had 5 betas before now for other stories and they all let me down... only one actually did anything and that was one chapter.
  
  well, anyway, I'm glad you like the story, and hope you keep reading, thanks.

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