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• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-10-08

  I couldn't make my mind up over what rating to use because it funny, kinda hot and emotional. So i had to go for ambiance.
  
  Can i just say i loved the sleepy Gerard - i wanted to jump into this story and hug him.
  
  Loved it - thank you
  
  Time is running out is one of my favourite Muse songs.

  Author's response

  Thanks Moonpig for reviewing. I couldn't resist a sleepy Gee. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying the story.
  
  I agree i love that song.

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-10-08

  Hi there Neve,
  
  Thanks for the little dedication, I loved them fighting over the record. I can so see that.
  
  Bob and Jill are just so cute together I could just picture the smile on his face when she came out of the hotel all dissheveled and how sweet it was when he carried her off to bed.
  
  I just loved reading this story and as usual can't wait for more.
  
  

  Author's response

  Hi, Thank you for reviewing. I wasn't planning to post so soon but i'm kind of stuck so i thought i would post what i had done so far.
  
  I've made Gerard a bit whiny so i wanted to write a funnier bit about him.
  
  In terms of Bob and Jill, they only have a short time left. aaaggghhhh i really hope you like what i do with them.

• Deadlines

  (#) disturbedangel6 2008-10-08

  Omg omg omg!!!!
  This is so good!
  I love the fact that the story isn't focused on just Jill and Bob
  Lol
  Gerard is sooooo cute!!!
  Update soonxx

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, i'm really enjoying writing this and it's so nice when you get reviews. Means alot. I'm trying to involve all the characters. I agree Gerard is too cute.

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-09

  Aaaah thanks so much for updating!
  
  the way you write Bob and Jill together is so lovely. and he called her Jilly! so sweet.
  
  and i love how you portray Gerard. sleepy Gerard is too lovely! i was giggling at the Iron Maidon record part! Jill falling for the Gerard manipulation and your description of him like a "flapping bird!" i could actually picture it!
  
  thanks so much and keep up the good work!
  
  oh and i love Muse also!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, i couldn't resist putting a sleepy Gerard in there so i'm glad you liked the image of him being like that. I love writing Ray too i guess he's a straight to the point kind of guy and there's a pissed off Ray in my next update.

• Deadlines

  (#) linerlover 2008-10-09

  thats sooo sweet!
  
  i really love the way you wrote gerard and ray arguing over the record... and the last line sounds exactly like me and my friends.
  
  more soon? =]

  Author's response

  Thank you, i wrote the Gerard and Ray bit a while ago and i'm so pleased it worked in the story. I know Gerard's the older one but i can imagine him and Frank being dumb every now and again.

• Deadlines

  (#) easykeys 2008-10-09

  This was such a good chapter. I loved sleepy Gerard as well, I could just imagine everything you said as being real.
  
  Bob+Jill= Cutenes!! theres my math for the day ;D
  
  Im gunna be so sad when she has too leave!!!
  
  More soon?
  
  dondon xo.

  Author's response

  Hurrah for sleepy Gerard, i'm so happy you like the dialogue and you like Jill and Bob. You might get annoyed with Jill in the next chapter but i hope you like it. Thanks for taking the time to review, i really appreciate it :)

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-10-09

  OMFG...i loved it!

  Author's response

  Your review made me laugh, thank you. I'm just about to post the next update so i hope you like it :)

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