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• Motorcycle

  (#) jabarber69 2008-10-11

  Hey thanks for continueing the story, but what gives, do you hate remus or something!?!
  
  Now that lucy is minister and voldie is in control of the ministry how can harry and hermione enter back into england...dont think it would be safe for them that is unless they stay in the muggle world...
  
  great story, hope you update a little bit sooner next time...

  Author's response

  One of the reasons this part took a while was Remus. A number of fan fictions write him as a second godfather. I decided to break him out of that mold and find the bitter werewolf inside. Then I had second, third, and fourth thoughts about doing it and just how to do it.

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  (#) dave_gerecke 2008-10-11

  I quite like this story and hope you continue with it.
  Particularly enjoyed chapter 6
  dave

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  (#) DrT 2008-10-11

  Glad this rather pathetic version of Remus got a lesson beaten into him. Good chapter, and very different than where I thought this might go after the 1st chapter

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  (#) Cateagle 2008-10-11

  Hmm, I'm going to be very interested in seeing where you take this. I can see the Potters slipping into England in purely muggle ways with the Warlocks and traveling with them as a means of not coming to the Ministry's attention. I would hope they can get Hermione's parents out of the country before matters get too bad (though seeing her parents reaction when she tells them that she's married to Harry, and proves it, should be quite interesting - similarly, I wonder if Fleur's mailing of the notice of marriage is going to get "lost in the bureaucratic snarl" that events in England have caused the rest of European wizarding?

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  (#) jjracer24 2008-10-11

  Still think this is an awesome story. I'm glad to see an update and look forward to future updates. I like how you've incorporated cannon into your story, good job with that. Keep up the good work.

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  (#) fbeast79 2008-10-12

  a different spin very good
  i like this story so far
  keep writing and we will see what happens next

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  (#) tumshie1960 2008-10-12

  Nice update, looking forward to more.
  
  Please note that timber should have been timbre. One or two more silly spelling/grammatical errors but not enough to spoil the story.

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  (#) twilliams1797 2008-10-13

  as many others have said, I am glad to see an update, this is one of my favorite stories.
  I also agree with some of the other comments, such as Robert 1958, he needs to work with the non-magical govt, the real Royal magical govt, and yes, where are the elves..
  
  looking forward to the next bit.
  (don't feel pressured, take the time to do it right, we'll wait)
  TW

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  (#) Wintervida 2008-10-16

  Fab story! i like the way that Remus was portrayed as it was quite realistic. Couple of spelling/grammar errors, looking forward to the next chapter!

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  (#) dennisud 2008-10-18

  Making Remus a spud-head here isn't one plot device not done before, but we can use his try at redeming himself through a few chapters. Wonder why Tonks hasn't been imprisoned for her being a shapechanger?
  
  dennisud

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