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Motorcycle
(#) chanewt906 2010-11-02
As so many others have so eloquently stated, Lupin has no one to blame for the erasure of any trust Harry and Hermione had for him - or the Order, for that matter - but himself.
Glad to see the new chapter; going to cycle (snicker) through your other stories, hoping forlornly that they, too, shall be updated...Motorcycle
(#) agnar1 2011-05-25
There seemed to be a few time line errors and misscommunications. In the earlier chapter, the scene where bill asks if they heard of horcruxes (or something like that) harry and hermione both reply no, but then seconds later harry confirms they do know of them by mentioning getting the slughorn memory, so that seemed odd.
The bigger issue was, bertha jorkins went missing between 3rd and 4th year, she's how LV learned of barty crouch jr. and the tri-wizard. Here you have her being involved before harry's 1st year.Motorcycle
(#) sidiousclone 2011-07-12
ive read this several times now and still enjoy it but i have to ask is it being abandoned?
hope to see it updated/finiished in the near future.Motorcycle
(#) jules3677 2012-09-12
Well I liked the plot of the first six chapters. Especially impressed with how Harry escaped from his relatives. Laughed at how he defeated a bikie. Was impressed that Drs' Granger allowed their school age daughter to go travelling around Europe with a school age male (whom they had never met), but hey this is fiction, lots of things happen which wouldn't in RL. Quite liked how you dealt with the curses & how they gained knowledge. I note that this story is quite old & has not been updated, this is a disappointment as I was looking forward to reading how you resolved all the foreseeable problems (plus the Grangers' discovering their minor daughter eloped). Nevermind, your story did have potential.Motorcycle
(#) Monbade 2013-03-14
This is a great story, i hope you one day finish it. I would Rate it, but its saying rating is closed do give yourself 5 on the story 5 being best.
MonbadeMotorcycle
(#) GBTtown 2013-07-02
After almost four and a half years, the chances of getting an update are slim and slimmer. Too bad!
Other than the last chapter, this is a really really enjoyable story. One of the best H/Hr I have read in a while. I liked their European adventures together and would have liked to read more along that line.
Remus Lupin is not one of my favorite characters. I think Harry's description of him as a coward is right on. He chose to listen to Dumbledork rather than do the right thing. Both in your story and canon. He left Harry to rot in Durzkaban, he left Sirius to rot in Azkaban. Just what kind of friend automatically assumes the worst about a friend and abandons his friend's child? Lupin is pitiful! AND he never deserved Tonks!Motorcycle
(#) HoosierPotter 2013-08-24
Good chapter I am just hoping for more you have a good story here and I am hoping you continue with it.
Now Remus is an arse in this last part of this story and now is trying to be a bit nicer after running his mouth at Harry and Hermione and is lucky Harry did go all fire and brimstone on his arse then you have Bill kicking the shit out of him for his lack of brains. He then thinks, like Ron, he can say sorry and Harry will forgive him. That is not going to happen this is not the same mushroom Harry Potter he used to know. Marrying Hermione and spending this time away from the others has made him more mature and smarter. Can't wait to see how you handle him meeting the Grangers and then Voldysnort.Motorcycle
(#) wolfgang108 2014-08-24
It has been just short of six years since the last update to an enjoyable story. Any chance of itbeing revisited or of you acctually still receiving these reviews ? Thanks for sharing what you did post.
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