(#) red_jacobson 2008-10-13Fun stuff; and I wouldn't mind seeing more of Harry and his Minions GRIN
Author's responseDang Red! I just managed to get it moved over here! Thanks for the kind review, but right now, I don't see the point of continuing it, other than the smut value (which IS of value, just not enough to carry the whole story along.)
- LMFAO!! too funny, If you wanted to this one could go beyond the one shot..keep up the great work.
Author's responseI thought about it, but smut for smut's sake just wouldn't be fun for me to write, and the plot is too thin for it to hold up.
Thanks for the review, though.
- Sounds like an interesting concept for a story. :)
If you do continue the story, the main point of the story could be what changes they manage to accomplish (the smut would be bonus to the story).
You might also want to consider bringing wizards into Harry's circle, just so he doesn't appear chauvinistic or anything like that.
Author's responseI thought about it, but I think it would quickly degenerate, due to the way I set this up.
If I did it, it would end up too similar to Rorschach's Blot's Thief's Dark Lord Jeremy character, and he pulled it off better than I could. I mean lines like "The wizengamot meeting was held up for hours to allow sixty three of its members to regain control of their senses and change out their knickers after repealing the last of the werewolf regulations" would quickly get boring.
BTW, I originally wrote and posted this in Apr '07, before I even read that particular story. Maybe even before it was written, but I don't know about that.
(#) twilliams1797 2008-10-13it could be fun.. admitting that he was a 'tripod'. heh.. extremely minor quibble.. you wrote seventh year when you meant second.
it looks like Harry actually had his future plans laid out before he came to talk with the nice lady.. like he was coming in to recruit her..
I think you can come up with a few chapters that would be fun, some cool rituals to make changes in the magical world,
so, then, every death eater had to receive personal attention from Voldy to join..no wonder they wore masks...
Author's responseNo, I meant seventh, as it was Clarise that was speaking at that point.
- This is a hoot!
Should you write more? Well, kinda. Personally the story isn't becoming the Light Lord, but rather a series of one-shots that covers what Harry learned by discovering and reading Salazar's books.
I can hear it now. "Honestly Harry, it has to be perfect. You really need to practice." Harry wondered once again how the girls in the DA learned of his discovery. He had a headache, but not that kind. It's been loved to the point of abuse and he just HAD to get out of there...
Or perhaps... after Harry asks about why Susan was clenching her legs together so tightly, Ginny whispers into her ear, "Remember you said 'oh, that's going to leave a mark'? Well, you did just that Harry, and she loves you for it!"
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