Categories > Books > Harry Potter
Career Options
18 reviewsHarry returns to Hogwarts after getting rid of Voldemort, but can't figure out what to do with his life. He schedules a career counseling session with his new head of house. Note: Refers to sexual ...
4Funny
Reviews
Career Options
(#) joehundredaire 2008-10-14
Primitive writing, simplistic story-telling, and a clichéd idea. Sorry. Unless you've improved significantly since you wrote this and are going to go over the first chapter with a fine-toothed comb before proceeding, I'm not looking forward to a second chapter.Author's response
Yup, I agree completely. This was my first ever fic, which was written April of 07. I like to think I've gotten better in the past year and a half, but I am turning down a lot of requests to continue this one precisely for those points, as well as the idea's been done before and much better than I can do at this time with where I left it.
I have a story that I AM going to rewrite about half of, but this isn't it, and it won't be up on here until I'm satisfied that I have enough time and energy to repair it before it will show up. Maybe winter time...
Thank you for your honest opinion. I appreciate it.Career Options
(#) Under_score 2008-10-21
I had a laugh, other than that nothing much to say.Author's response
For this particular story, I could ask for nothing more. It was intended to be a humorous little fic. Your review tells me I succeeded. Thank you.Career Options
(#) selonianth 2008-12-12
It WAS funny but i do wish it could hold up on more.... or at least ONE smut sceneCareer Options
(#) Coolone007 2008-12-18
It is a great start. I wish you would keep going with this fic. This in my humble opinion is a great start. There is a huge range of how this can go. please keep going.Career Options
(#) nomad062 2009-01-03
I completely agree with the other reviewers regarding the idea of more to this story. At the same time you have made a point. Not much plot to go on. But you know, I really think there should be at least one written story containing a Light Lords revel. I mean, after all, there are sooo many Dark lord revels out there! Grin.
Thanks for sharing,
Nomad
PS could you hook me up with a link to Rorschach's story? I'm not having much luck tracking it down.
Career Options
(#) dp3062 2009-11-09
Good story. You should continue it. Yes you could add some funny sexual scenes to it. They don't have to smut for smut's sake. I look forward to more chapters.Career Options
(#) aka_thenewguy 2010-05-21
What do I think? I think we want to know more! What happens next? And please... descirbe in detail just how Harry marks his minnions. :D
Sign up to review this story.