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Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) bogan 2008-10-31
Wow! I didn't know I would find a story that stupid today. Thanks for lowering my opinion of ff writers even more, you damned idiot.Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) jjracer24 2008-11-01
Glad to see you back to writing, I too had forgotten about this story but am glad to see you continue it. If I could only make one suggestion, well more of a request really, it would be for longer chapters. I know this is probably going to be a hard request to fill but it would be greatly appreciated.Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) deamon 2008-11-04
This story, in a short succinct sentence just so you understand, is complete and utter garbage. Your writing ability is nil and you basically have absolutely no plot. Good job, yeah...Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) slashslut 2008-11-04
i don't understand the people that have read the story and decided to say such mean things. it's fine if you don't like something but there's no need to be so cutting in your comments. if you don't have anything constructive to say, don't say it. climbs down off soap box im glad you're more confident in yourself and your writing to continue and not let other people's comments stop you from doing what you like and what many other people enjoy reading. im enjoying the story, especially the fact that harry has decided to be strong and not back down. looking forward to reading more about what will happen when ron and others realize how wrong they are about harry. one thing though, PLEASE don't have harry decide to forgive them at some point. they totally DON'T deserve it! keep writing!Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) Vilkath 2008-11-05
Not the best of stories, but also not the worst by a large margin. The plot and characters are interesting but way to many cliche's are used and events move faster then is really comfortable.
Worst are emotions things just happen, very little build up and not much lingers either. Jst a shot in the dark set up with the scene moving on as quickly as possible after words. Stuff like Harry and Fleur's declaration of love within seconds of meeting is a good sign of this.
All that said, and what ever kind of negative comments might of gotten are just things to be improved. No one's perfect and as they say practice practice practice. The important thing is to always try to improve and make each new chapter better then the last, and each new story better then your previous one.
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(#) Asmod 2008-11-07
I know you've heard this plenty of times by now, but really, this story sucks. Get a coherent plot together before posting.Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) DragonsFlame89 2008-11-08
you know i dont get what is the problem with the people that are rating this story. im mean a -1?!?! what are they thinking? to me this story on a one to five should get like a 3.75. for a first time writer this story is very good. some of what these guys say is true but look at the guy that wrote the erigon books. the way he wrote it was the story was on the how much stuff he could fit into a book. his books are good but this story to me is better then the erigon books. whatever some of these assholes are saying dont let them get to you. their just saying the shit cause they know what youve written is better then what they could write or have written. keep the story coming!!!Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) balrog 2008-11-20
I agree with dragonsflame89. Don't let the people leaving the bad review get you down, they just want to put their two cents in. If you write more I'll read it.Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) Abunix 2008-11-25
I really have to know, are you pulling of a My Immortal on us?
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(#) Kwisatz_Haderach 2009-01-25
Complete and utter crap. Just stop writing please. Look at your story rating, people do not call it a train wreck for nothing...
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