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• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) kaylee52107 2009-10-06

  I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
  
  
  
  Thank you,
  
  
  
  Terri

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) Zucht 2011-02-16

  I like this story. Tracy Davis is a little used character so you can be creative. I Love Fluer and like the way you are handling her.
  
  I hope yoou pick-up this story again.

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) Gayman 2011-05-07

  i have'nt readed your story just scheme and so far it seem to be a very good story i hope you make an compeletion soon. good luck

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) wapitibull 2011-06-01

  I think the story is great. The plot is very good. The only problem I see is it moves very fast. If you took longer to develope the story (flesh everything out more) it could be abslutley fantastic. There are a few points that didn't really ring true for me, like Harry fainting & crying; Harry & Fluer making out in th street in the middle of a fight; Harry growing a foot in height. But those are small points. However I believe that the rule in fiction is that the only rules are what ever the author decdides. I don't mean any of this as flames, so please don't take it as such.
  I like the pairing of H/F, but would have liked seeing them take longer to decide they were in glourious love, than the 5 min. it seemed like.
  So for me, if you slowed your pace some, & provided more insight, even at the risk of taking longer it will work better. It seems that the longer the story goes, the better your writting gets. Thanks for a grat story, & please don't give up.

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) handy 2011-08-13

  i think you have a great premise for the story. please continue writing.

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) handy 2011-08-13

  i think you have a great premise for the story. please continue writing.

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) Rezrex 2012-01-07

  This story is crap. Get your ass out of writing. All cliche. I tried to rate your last chapter, but the negative rating block is disabled, cause your story can't be rated further in that direction! You know, there are mean people out there, trolls even, but that your story cannot be rated negatively any further... It means something. It means, that you aren't a writer so DON'T WRITE!!!

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) DoomRider 2012-10-19

  whens the next chapter?

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) killa45 2014-08-25

  Please update soon... ive seen a few spelling mistakes but thats it. You have alot of talent please dont let it go to waste

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) KingRider6911 2015-09-25

  It's actually a good story.. There are some mistakes that were kinda comical and some of the grammar could be better but all in all its a good story.. Please update soon!!

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