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Unspeakable
(#) easykeys 2008-11-09
Oh my god.
That was really really good! It was so sad aswell.
I am almost crying, which believe me takes a lot!
that was a really nice story, especially with his grandma in it :)
great job!
dondon xo.Author's response
Hey, thanks for reviewing! The second chapter should be up soon (with luck)Unspeakable
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-10
Ooooo ... I'm intrigued. This was a real emotional beginning. I love that song btw!Author's response
Glad you liked it. I don't even know the whole of that song or even who sings it; I was watching Hellboy the other day and thought, 'that would make a good funeral song'...so yeah.
(your stories rock!!!)
Wait! Wait! It's Vera Lynn! (I think)
Yeah, I just checked. Vera Lynn--We'll Meet Again
(When both our caaaars colliiide...haha couldn't resist!)Unspeakable
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-11-10
I already told you how much I liked the first chapter to your story, and merci por le... I dunno french, so fuck that, thank you for the creds.
Just one thing - put a line break between your paragraphs. You don't have to do that in "real" life because of indents, but since ficwad doesn't allow you to indent, you just put in line breaks between every new paragraph or piece of dialogue. It makes it much easier to read and you might even get more readers, cause it doesn't like a huge one paragraphed story.
Anyway, can't wait til I get the new chapter. Good job.
Unspeakable
(#) Sassy 2009-01-27
OMG! I can't believe I've only just found this! It's excellent and so well written. I was on the edge of my seat reading just the opening chapter!
You don't need to ask people to be kind, trust me, this story speaks for itself!
Sas xUnspeakable
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-04
Oh my gosh! That's so sad... Maybe if he hadn't said anything..she wouldn't have turned and shot again?
Poor Mikey!
REVENGE
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