- You have shown Luna and Hermione as growing closer as friends that are able to suport and care for each other. Is there any chance that if Harry reaches a point that he says the he cares for both that they can except sharing?
I went back check what was going with Tonks and wonder if there would be a chance that they could become "kissing" cousins?
I think that a diamond formation is much more defensible than a duo or triangle ones. Armies from Rome through the U.S. cavalry to modern day usually have a point men, outriders, and a those who watch what is happening behind the group. And people that work together continually over time and know how each in the group is going to react are considered the best.
I was glad to see the Ginny had decided that Nevil would be a very good replacement for Harry.
Thank you for a very interesting story. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
May the MUSE always be with you!!!
- Very nice, but there were a few things that confused me. I find it difficult to believe that Harry was the first world traveler to go to Gringotts while in a foreign country and want to withdraw some money. That would seem a rather obvious hint to everyone just like it was to Harry. Perhaps "not allowed by treaty" might work better. Harry doesn't obviously appear to need additional transport methods.
Does the head of the DMLE really not have any safehouses or executive protection suites to stay in? Would being taught by Harry and Tonks in foreign lands be protection enough for Susan? It seemed a rather obvious option (more so that what you did) but I suppose after such a scare Bones might want to keep Susan close.
- Ooh! I like this story!
I'm just sad that you haven't updated it for such a long time...
As proved by Snape and Dumbledor's meeting, there are things we don't know (Albus DID take Amelia with him to protect her, but why didn't he try to do anything about Susan? Snape DID warn Albus about the attack, but... well, we all know Snape...)
I'd love to read more... Please...
(#) LordMesron 2010-09-08This story has been really good so far. Any chance you are going to write more of it soon?
I do like what you are doing with Harry, Hermione and Luna. Any chance you are heading towards H/Hr/L? I figured that was where it was headed from the summaries, plus the way Hermione and Luna are sleeping in the same bed; and the whole switching off of girlfriends.
- A long time waiting for an update so I'm assuming you've abandoned this excellent story for some reason. Too bad really, it has lots of promise.
As a threesome, this story would work, so in the back of your mind, I hope that is what you are/were thinking.
With Hermione and Luna sharing a bed at least some times, I think this would appeal to Harry as a good thing if he decides to keep both girls as girlfriends/lovers/wives.
- I can see from the ratings that someone was being a jerk - the reviews don't reflect the ratings this story has. Not a bad story at all, but I wish it had stayed a Harry Luna pairing only. I like H/Hr as much as anyone, but I personally don't think any girl would be giving a possible rival a chance like that.
(#) wolfgang108 2014-09-03Great story. Sorry to see it stop six years ago. Any chance of itbeing revisited or could it have been continued else where ?
Author's responseYou can find the revised and most up to date version on fanfiction.net (same author name).
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