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The Face in the Pool
(#) noreenklose 2009-04-17
Excellent story. I wonder if Dumbles would kiss Snape's a**????
I love stories where Dumbles is shown ALL of his shortcomings.
Well, I'm off to read another of your great stories. Thanks for writing.
KUTGW,
Noreen
The Face in the Pool
(#) Quackpotty 2009-06-25
Interesting story. It had a bit of an anti-climatic ending, but it was enjoyable overall anyway. Thanks for the story!The Face in the Pool
(#) Total_Blue 2009-06-28
Short but to the point. I really really liked it. Good story, thanks for sharing it with us.The Face in the Pool
(#) fibinaci 2009-11-13
Very well done, I was worried when Harry began the de rigeur tantrum but was terribly pleased when it turned into a plan of his to get the elder wand. The bit with only the muggleborns(and raised) knowing the bible verse was a nice touch too.The Face in the Pool
(#) Delrusant 2010-08-26
This was a great one shot like HP fanfic, really original and well thought. The premise are extraordinary but no more than some other fanfic settings. The rebellion in itself, the kick in the ant colony that might or may not start to move british wizarding world in the right way.
Bravo and thanks for all the time you spent writingThe Face in the Pool
(#) taxzombie 2014-06-18
A most interesting short story. Glad it wasn't your 'swan song'.
Nicely done.The Face in the Pool
(#) NobleK 2014-07-07
Good riddance to pure-blood bigots and Death Eater scum!! EVIL LAUGHAuthor's response
Thanks for the reviews; I'm glad you are enjoying the stories!The Face in the Pool
(#) Bronze 2015-09-19
Loved the story. And finally, Dumbass Dumbledore had to clean up the mess he started over fifty years ago! Now I would like to know who Harry married? Was it Hermione or Luna or both or someone else? And Draco having to spend an entire year as an Ermine as well as loosing his balls? PRICELESS!!! Now with hubby gone what is Mummy gonna play with in bed? Oh wait ! She's been making do without any since Draco proved to be male while still in the womb. I truly love a good smart Harry story. And as others've said, Harry was smart enough to get out when he was done with his part and force the adults to finally get off their asses and clean up their own mess. Bud give it a while then if you still got nothing, kick your muse in the ass so hard she'll be awake for the foreseeable future! :-)
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