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The Art Of Holding Hands
(#) Musicismylife 2009-01-13
yet another great chapter :)
don't worry about the lack of reviews
your not shit
your amazing :)
-Jana-Lynn
xoThe Art Of Holding Hands
(#) pups94 2009-01-14
Why, just /why/, did you put a freaking smiley in there? ^_^ is not a word nor a suitable expression for a story. Maybe when you're IMing your friends; but never in a story -.-"
Still bad grammar, and jees, learn to use commas correctly.
I know I sound harsh but it's for your own improvement -.-"Author's response
although yes i will admit critical advice is needed and i appreciate your level of interest in my work i do think that your tone is a little harsh and possibly uncalled for here. it's not like i'm writing a novel!! it's some silly little thrill for me to excersise my writing skills. i do appreciate your opinion on the matter of punctuation, i can use it perfectly well, but this is just some website people like me use when they are bored.The Art Of Holding Hands
(#) xXHeavenHelpUsXx 2009-01-28
That is not completely true. Many of us take our work seriously. Frerard is an artform through many of our eyes. We have come to appreciate it when it is done correctly. If you want to practice your writing skills,doing it correctly could help. This is hardly for boredom. It's just our legal drug. Frerard is a part of me. Nothing less. Find where we are coming from here.Author's response
Okay i appreciate your criticism and i have already apologized for my spelling mistakes!! You may see Frerard as a piece of art thats your opinion. Mcr are a part of my heart they saved my life but frerard is just a fantasy to me. Im sorry if i have offended you and i appreciate your review even if it had nothing to do with my story! Xo charlotte xoThe Art Of Holding Hands
(#) BuiltForSin 2009-05-12
Ok so i know this happened a while ago and yeah there have been a lot more chapters (that i've already commented on) and even though these people probably won't even see this i feel like i have to take a stand! Ok so back the fuck off!!! You guys didn't even read any of the new chapters, each time they have gotten better and better, so again back the fuck off!!!! There is no way to do Frerard right or wrong it's how you want it to be, your the creator, you can make it however you want it to be!!!! FUCK YOU!!! Wow, ok i went a little off there, heehee sorry!!! Love you and your stories Lottie!!!!!!Author's response
tears thankyou so much XD....that was so nice haha =]
muchly muchly muchly appreciated squeal
i feel so loved :D hugs yaaaay lovage ;) hehe
thanks for reviewing :)
xoxo Lottie oxoxThe Art Of Holding Hands
(#) drinksomejuice 2009-09-03
CHARLOTTE! It's Cara.
Anyways, I love your writing style. I think it's really sweet, and although you canny spell that well... So what? Your writing is really personal the way you do it, and it's just like your telling a story the way that you speak. Keep up the good work chiccck. =DAuthor's response
noooo waaay are you on here XD
haha my own cousin thats so fecking cool
but i can spell haha honest my other chapters prove it haha
thankyouuu my little munchkin :D
xoxoxoxo
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