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• Searching for the Power

  (#) Celexs 2009-03-15

  Awesome story, It flows really well. I cant wait for the next chapter, and getting to Sept 1.
  
  Cel

  Author's response

  I am so right there with you. As much fun as writing a smutty romance novel is, I really do have a bit more story to tell.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) oldsarge 2009-03-15

  Good to hear that your daughter is doing well. Thanks for taking the time to still update this wonderful story. To be honest, the little scene with Emma in the pool was completely unexpected. Harry's reaction is very in character I think. It's great that you continue to surprise us. Looking forward to more of this story. I think Neville should get Hannah. He deserves it. Let Ron have Lavender I think. Luna deserves Harry. Please bring Gabby back soon.
  
  Thanks.

  Author's response

  Gabby is going to stay at Beauxbattons for at least a little while into Hogwarts. She has her own major role to play in the plot so people might want to start looking for little hints, go back and re-read if you want.
  
  I cannot remmeber which story I read where Harry ended up in love with both Hermione and Emma, but it ended up that Dan was infertile and that is why Mione never got a little bro/sis and he asks Harry to help them out.
  
  Of course that story quickly turned into an incest story with Hermione and Dan as well which threw me off. I understand that with no risk of pregnancy that there really isn't any scientific reason not to let her have sex with her daddy, it is just wrong on so many levels. That author did a good job of making it okay though...
  
  Anyway Ron/Lav and Nev/Han and Har/Lu is pretty much set, BUT that doesnt mean there wont be any Harry Lav or Harry Hannah still to come. Hannah was under the effects of the compulsion charm just like Susan so she might have a difficult time letting go...
  
  Gabby/Harry is one of my all time favorite ships, but unfortunately my Gabby still needs a lot of character development and that is hard to do with her so far away and while competing for story time with all these other girls. If you havent already, I suggest reading Love Has No Age for another wonderful Harry Gabby story.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) DragonWing 2009-03-15

  I am glad to hear about your daughter. Now onto the review.
  
  I have to say that whole scene with Hermione's mother caught me off guard (something that doesn't happen often, believe me) so good job there, and you had Harry in character as well, so good job there too. It's becoming very obvious where Hermione gets her kinky side the more we see of her mother.
  
  I like how you developed Dan, from the murderous father who is a member of the Spanish Inquisition (they didn't go away, they became dentists. I loved that line) and gets a very good opinion of Harry when it came to food.
  
  Looking forward to the political Harry in the upcoming chapters. Keep up the good work.

  Author's response

  I'm glad I was able to surprise the readers, makes me realize my story is not completely predictable.
  
  I am a father myself, and even being so sexually free myself, I will still have the urge to kill any boys that come near my daughters in 10 years or so. But I am also reasonable and if the boy is good for her I know I will come around eventually.
  
  Especially if he can cook the steak I described...I hope you were all drooling right along with Dan like I was.
  
  My Political Harry is subtle, I am not the best at writing that sort of character..yet. He will probably grow into the role just like everythign else rather than all of a sudden becoming the perfect politcal machine.
  
  Many things just seem to drop into his lap. But I guess that comes with the silver spoon.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) Ryudo3 2009-03-16

  Love the update. I'm glad to see Harry and tonks or going to try a relationship. Honestly I wasn't really surprise with harry and Emma. I more then thought it was a little more comic and to the scene to show that harry still is not all that perfect.
  
  I think Ginny would have sometime to be with harry on weekends. And if his relationship works out with tonks who to know that we might not see scene with Harry/Hermione/Emma(Tonks).
  
  Glad to hear your daughter is doing good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

  Author's response

  I was going for funny not necessarily steamy. Glad you picked up on it, and I didn't say I surprised everyone, just glad to know that I got a few people with that one. More surprises in store for the future.
  
  Ginny will have time, but half the girls Harry dates would want a real relationship which relegeates the other girls to each other. Not that Gin, Mione, and Susan would complain much, and Tonks might be along for the ride as well.
  
  And a willing metamorphmagus with permission to clone someone will or might...be lots of fun. Mostly with two Ginny or Hermione's but if tonks simply straightened Mione's hair it would be close enough.
  
  But no, Tonks probably would need permission to do something like that. It's one thing to impersonate a criminal, its another to basically polyjuice yourself into another woman...

• Searching for the Power

  (#) issabissa 2009-03-16

  Another wonderful chapter!!! You are doing a fabulous job! Keep up the great work!

  Author's response

  Thank you,
  
  Man o Man I am so glad I am finishd with 41. It is really hard to write that many girls together. It is hard enough to write 2 of them with Harry, when they all get together I Feel like one of them is being left out.
  
  Then again, that is how I feel about moresomes. One guy plus more than two girls means someone is getting left out of attention.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) icyflame 2009-03-21

  (I'm actually reviewing about a 3rd of the way through the chapter)
  
  Seriously, thank you so much. In just about every Independent!Harry story I've read, Harry has said "I'm doing things my way! I need Followers!" and Remus has said something along he lines of "Wow Harry you're so grown up for a 15 year old, I'm at your beck and call and totally ready to blindly follow you because your parents were AWESOME!"
  
  Yeah, no, Remus is and adult who can respect the maturity, but he's not going to drop right int loyal-follower mode. Thank you for making him a real person =)
  
  IcyFlame
  
  p.s. Harry Saved Gabby in the second task. Not super important but I thought I would let you know for future reference
  
  I may review again on this chapter when I finish it

  Author's response

  Glad to see you like my Remus...
  
  Did I accidentally say the wrong task? Let me take a look and give you credit for pointing it out.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) thealphamale 2009-03-28

  Ah! I've been reading some of the chapters and I came across this one, hoping I would see a Harry/Emma smut scene but to no avail. It's impossible to find any stories with that pairing besides Kinsfire's.

  Author's response

  I like Harry/ Emma, especially my Emma. But I don't want to just rip off Kinsfire like you said.
  
  Maybe I will toss them together again later though, you never know.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) siledubhghlase 2009-03-30

  Very funny, Scotty. Now beam down my clothes (a bumper sticker I saw once).
  
  THAT WAS HYSTERICAL! When Harry puts his foot in it, he really puts his foot in it! I'm surprised he didn't just escape altogether!
  
  I was wondering if Harry and Tonks were going to "get together." I think the blow about the compulsion charm has him a bit spooked, so he doesn't want to rush anything. Also, Harry's worries about Susan are probably in his way too. He's got Gabby and his Main Squeezes worked out, so that's a load off.
  
  Now that Tonks and Harry are working on the DWD drills, it sounds like their first--er--encounter might take place during a practice session. High energy, lots of concentration, magic rolling off Harry (and perhaps Tonks) in waves, sweaty bodies, heavy breathing... nevermind.
  
  So Ron rubs Tonks the wrong way, huh? It appears Ron rubs MANY people the wrong way, but he has hope. Luna stepped in and made him change his ways. She's shown him that his attitude cost him Hermione and damned near his friendship with Harry. But if she doesn't straighten him out, maybe Lavender can.
  
  Anyway... I'm excited to see how all of this shakes out. Make the chapters as long or short as you need to to keep the story flowing without rushing it. We, your faithful readers, shall LIVE. Keep up the good work, though!
  
  Sheila

• Searching for the Power

  (#) EdTheBeast 2021-11-26

  Still a must read!!!!!!!!!! This chapter, I did not notice the from/form errors, I saw in other chapters. Great going!

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