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You're my what?
(#) dennisud 2009-04-27
First a Plausible A/U from the Tri-wizard on.
I would suggest, as this might go through Harry's 5th year, allow Hermione, Neville and Luna to help. Ron & Ginny would be too influenced by Molly to be that here.
Dumbles and the British ministry will HAVE to deal with the French and Voldy being back ealy. The IWC will also have to step in too.
Can't wait how this develops!
dennisudYou're my what?
(#) stick97 2009-04-27
Let Fleur screw with Harry's head a bit.
"But Harry, you saved me from that 'orrible Krum!"
Great story, and hope to see more.
You're my what?
(#) NacNud 2009-04-27
Really liked the story so far. Can't wait to see what you have planed next.
I liked the story more as a drama than as a humor story so I was slightly confused by the story coding but I still think it is a excellent story so far. Keep up the good work.You're my what?
(#) zicou 2009-04-27
Did harry bond fleur too ? because he saved her from Krum...
That was great, can't wait to read more so ...
Continuuuuuuuue!
Z.You're my what?
(#) juggler196 2009-04-27
THIS HAD BETTER NOT BE A ONE-SHOT STORY!:-) I've read a number of stories where Gabrielle bonds with Harry in a much more intimate and submissive way, but i like the 'innocence' of this story. It makes harry out to be a real kid that needs the help of adults to survive the 'final battle'. While 'super-harry' stories are also entertaining to read, i you've done a good job with this kind of story. I've also never read a story where harry is able to take a killing curse and shake it off like it's no big deal, and i'm definitely curious to see where this goes. I think i can safely say that you'll have number of upset readers if you let this story die!:-)You're my what?
(#) jabarber69 2009-04-28
so far so good...and your right why would anyone care if you borrowed their ideals, hell we all borrowed rowlings ideals in the first place, right!You're my what?
(#) Wolfric 2009-04-28
Great story. I look forward to seeing additional installments as you can. Thanks for writing. W.You're my what?
(#) lil-lou 2009-04-28
plz add more. i really enjoyed this rather unusual rewrite of a chapter from Harry Potter. i must say that this is one of the best rewrites i ahev read and let me tell you, thats a lot. i love it and i can not wait for you to add more. i love the way Snape gets his commupence along woth some other key charaters and most importantly that none of the good guys were killed off like Cedric. Perfect.
LouiseYou're my what?
(#) rb8 2009-04-28
I love this story so far. If I had to give criticism, I would have to say that you could have expanded it greatly and covered all this in at least 4-5 chapters of this length.
Looking forward to more.
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