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You Get Under My Damn Skin.
(#) Moonshyne 2009-06-27
Hi there,
I felt so sad for her when she was at the cemetary, and I love the whole butterfly sequence. It was cool that Bob drove by seeing a person and not realizing it was her.
I see Frankie is still having taser problems, LOL!!
That was sweet of Bob offering to listen.
I love the whole talking to themselves too funny.
It's cute how she's starting to think of him that way.
Looking forward to more when you can!!Author's response
Thank you Moonshyne! (:
Aww yeah, writing the cemetary part was fun (: I had to throw Bob not realizing it was her, hehe.
Yup poor Frankie, and his taser problems, just can't seem to understand how to operate those things....
Bob was nice this time (:
And yeah writing the inner thoughts was idk... (:
Thanks again, I appreciate it.You Get Under My Damn Skin.
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-06-27
Gahhhh i loved this!!!
Frankie is just so awesome with his taser problems :)
I like how you add them talking to themselves because most people don't do that!!!
Great chapter please update soon?!?!?!Author's response
Thank you! xD
Yeah Frank trying to figure out the taser. His awesomeness is what makes him an exception at the station (:
Lol! And yes, the inner thoughts were fun to write. I like putting them in there, I agree, more people should try putting that in there as well. (:
Thanks again.You Get Under My Damn Skin.
(#) lostmyfearoffalling 2009-06-27
Yay!!!! Haha. Frank does NOT posses the abilities necessary to work a taser. But that's ok.... I want Bob to slam ME down on the table. :] more soon please!Author's response
We ALL want Bob to slam us down on a table...omfg....
Anyways.....xD
Frank just can't use a taser properly. I'm not even sure if he can handle ANY weapon for that matter..(: hehe.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it (:You Get Under My Damn Skin.
(#) WildEyedJoker 2009-06-28
Hey there, that was great! :D I loved it (:
I think it's great how Frank can't work the tazer xD Maybe be someday he'll learn..maybe.
Looking forward to the next update!Author's response
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it (:
Aww everyone here just loves Frank don't they? xD Tasers are not his best friend, but maybe one day they'll be able to repair their relationship (:
Thanks again (:You Get Under My Damn Skin.
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-07-07
Ha ha Bobert....I luff this :) And I totally agree with you on the whole more reviews = faster updates. That's why I don't update very much anymore, ya know? L O L
Well I'll just stop ranting and read..something..:)
REVENGE
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