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• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-07-03

  Oh! If the spanish is jibberish you are welcome to shoot me Natalie lol I used one of those translation sites.

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) xPrettyInPunkx 2009-07-03

  when I found out who had healed my ankle and who was checking me out, I swear I was biting my finger (a nervous/excited habit). My dream has come true XD Wonderful chapter it t'was tres magnific!! =) Can't wait for more as always

  Author's response

  You got some Stump woohoo ;-) thanks.

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) let_it_go 2009-07-03

  nice....
  
  yeah, that's all i really have to say on this one. xD i loved it, as per usual.

  Author's response

  Thank you glad you love it as per usual.

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-07-04

  Awwww god I felt like crying reading that dude! Hahha
  
  Messed up but I actually can't write Spanish for shit. It's weird. But thank you. And you did good.
  
  I love how you put the spotlight on certain characters each chapter. Very cool. :)
  
  Lovvvved it.
  Gabe better come back!!
  Ahah update soon fellow Natalie. :)
  -Natalie

  Author's response

  Ola: thats as far as my spanish goes and i'm pretty sure it aint spelt right. .Thanks. Yes the spotlight will shine on everyone (eventually)

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) _nox_ 2009-07-05

  8D
  Areeba areeba, andole andole!
  Is that right? No. xDDD
  I updated my story (you might want to glance back at that- yes, I updated XD).
  Anyhoww, how could I not like this chapter? As a human, I am prone to small amounts of vanity, and I must say my ego feels fabulous.
  

  Author's response

  Is the top line right? I have no clue. I'm happy for your ego. :-)

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) MyChemicalFangirl 2009-07-05

  Hehee. I shall deal with not haveing Patrick. XD
  Hmm.. who else..
  I'de have to go for my next loveofmylife.. Frank Iero from MyChemicalRomance?
  You said to name three though..
  So he's first choice for sure.
  Second..
  Alex Saurez from Cobra Starship.
  And third, Jersey from Hey Monday.
  I'de also be absolutly over the moon with Gerard Way or Mikey.
  So I'll let you decide!
  But yeah,
  Loved this update!
  I always love reading your writing. You seriously rock! XD
  And I have no idea's for the name of the next chapter,
  how about something random ass..
  Like the next line of lyrics in the song I'm listening too?...
  "Too much time to think about what to think about.."
  OR..
  "you left your head in the radio"
  Lmfao!
  I'm listening to Kiss The Haze by House Of Fools if you are wondoring. XD
  And yeah, LOOOONG review!! ':D
  Update soon!
  Love you, Christie,xo

  Author's response

  Okey dokey thanks I'll think it over.

• Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side

  (#) ohhai 2009-07-05

  OHEY GUESS WHO FINALLY REVIEWED THIS SHIT?
  ME.
  lol sorry it took so long, i was on vacayyy.
  damn. that was sad. and "awww" worthy. bravo.
  
  and idk what to name it unless I know what happens, so spoilers, y/n?
  haha just kidding, I'll throw some out there:
  "You were fake, I was great, nothing personal"
  "That Rihanna Sheen"
  "throw some d's on that bitch"
  "never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down, never gonna run around and desert you"
  the first was actually fo serious, the other three are jokes but feel free to use them and make me laugh my ass off :D

  Author's response

  There you are! Lol thanks.

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