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• Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

  (#) JDE 2009-07-16

  Enjoyable. Rarely is Black used in this manner. Far to often he's shown as a suicidal clown which doesn't make sense if you consider his supposed history.

• Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

  (#) Hamm_On_Wry 2009-07-16

  Good plotline, however you need to go back into the previous two chapters and edit them in order to get rid of the confusion between the different timelines. The first two chapters have the canon timeline, then you switch for the third. By 1991, the Reagan-Thatcher alliance was two years dead and the pendulum was swinging back the other way.
  
  Once you get the chapters integrated it should work out okay.

• Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

  (#) HarryFan51 2010-01-12

  This is a good story, are you going to continue it? I hope that you do. Also please check you date line, Voldimort attacked the Potters on Halloween in 1981, unless you are using a different date-line, which as the writer you can.

• Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

  (#) lancelot1 2010-11-12

  ok i gotta say this is a seriously good story! the only bad thing is that you haven't updated it in so long!!! so please update soon!

• Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

  (#) ngbeken 2010-11-20

  i love this. this is exactly how its supposed to be like.i love continue

• Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

  (#) Uncle_Buck 2011-05-23

  I can see the French Mediteranian coast being a great summer place to grow up. with a Black Villa posessing a private cove or Lagoon providing secure enjoyment.

• Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

  (#) Monbade 2013-03-12

  very good story, please say you're working hard on the next chapter.
  
  Monbade

• Harry Potter and Fawkes' Furture

  (#) LordMesron 2014-04-21

  I just found this story and love where you are going with it. hint hint
  
  I have to agree with an earlier poster in that the inclusion of Susan and Amelia would be good. Maybe get the Greengrass's involved too. :)
  
  I hope you are going to continue this story sometime soon.

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