- That was EXCELLENT!!!! I just couldn't stop reading it!!
A sad story, delicately told. When Frank was crying, it felt real, touching and not overly-dramatic (which is an easy trap to fall into).
I can't believe you took this down, but I'm glad you reposted, it's a lovely story. Well thought out, wonderful dialogue,romance without everyone leaping into bed as soon as they meet and really well paced.
You should be really proud of this!
Author's responseThankies so much! I figured since I'm getting "oh so popular" on this account, I might as well post older stories on this one. Although, there's one that I really don't want to repost LoL it's so poorly written, and it's my first actual fic. But I might just rewrite it or something ^^
- The thing with this category is that there are so many stories being posted, you can drop off the first page in hours and sometimes it's really hard to spot the really good writers straight off.
You have to persevere and keep at it before you 'make a name for yourself' so to speak. And the good ones do, because they write for the love of it. Don't get me wrong, reviews help, but that's not the main reason for writing. And when that's true, your passion for writing shines through.
You're a really good writer and you shouldn't stop. If you're not happy with an older piece, which happens to us all as we grow and improve, make a few changes until you are happy - I've done that. I'm sure a lot of people have. And I'm looking forward to reading it!
I'm just sorry it's taken me this long to get around to reading some of your stories, but better late than never, eh? :)
Author's responseOoh don't get me wrong, I like reviews and stuff..it's the rating I could use more of.. Just cos it makes anyone feel happy, ya know?
Anyway, take your time, I totally get that you're busy. Not all of us are teens that have nothing better to do than surf the web all day, right?
Man I wish I had a job!
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