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Killing Time
25 reviewsin which Harry has a small reunion with his adopted brother, demonstrates ‘The Ribbon’ to the Magical world, and laments lost opportunities. Lucius Malfoy and Severus Snape make some very larg...
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Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) cloneserpents 2009-09-05
I'm a little sad that Harry wasn't the one to kill Snape. However, I will take solace in the greasy git's death.
Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)Author's response
- I tried to make his death as consequential as the man himself.Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) LabRat 2009-09-08
after reading Remo's note, I'm kind of hoping something happens that gets Little Father involved. maybe Harry getting frustrated about being held back, and inquiring help on drawing Lord Funny French Name out. funny thing, I just get this odd feeling that Harry could get through all 37 steps with Hermione (likely only through her sheer stubbornness).Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) slack 2009-10-11
His name was Harry Potter... lol - read the Destroyer years ago - loved it then. This one rocks lol - more! more! :)Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) The_Pharaoh 2011-02-02
"Squishies" LOL!
I think you overdo Hagrid's accent and I can't see McGonagall sporting a thick Scottish brogue, but aside from people's speech patterns and the occasional use of "the" in front of someone's name (is this translated from another language?), this story is great so far. And don't worry about chapters being too long.Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) PGHammer21 2020-10-07
You think that Remo Williams is a kvetcher? Please; Chiun is a much bigger one - even when Warren Murphy wrote the series alone when Pinnacle was still the publisher of record. (While Pinnacle was the ORIGINAL publisher, it was not the ONLY publisher - and is not the publisher of record today.) If it weren't improbable, I would think that Remo and Chiun give lessons to the authors of "The Young and the Restless" storyline - and as to why "Y&R" in particular, it is one of the few daytime dramas that is still around - with most of the original cast - from the early days of "The Destroyer" book series - and Chiun in particular was a notorious bingewatcher of them.)
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