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• Come Spend A Week With Us...

  (#) neonlights 2009-09-21

  You realise this is pretty much identical to Brothers and Sisters by Moocow?

  Author's response

  what? what's that.... this has already been done?
  damn. and i thought it was pretty original
  
  Oh haha I found Your story. And here are the differences for you
  
  1.) Yours os good, people want to read it, it isn't stupid, and it actually has a plot, and is going somewhere
  
  2.)The above comment? My story has none of those things, this was a DREAM i had, and posted to make people smile, I don't even know if i want to continue or not, and if i do, it won't even be in the same LEAGUE as yours it'll just be more weirdness from the boys probably
  
  3.) I'm adding a twist in the next chapter, to change the storyline completely and make you happy, Okay?
  
  I'm a pretty agreeable person people, If you don't like something I've done, tell me and I'll do my best to make you happy...just don't get all pissy or yelly or whatever
  
  
  
  
  actually....did you even READ my story? It has absolutly nothing in common with yours

• Come Spend A Week With Us...

  (#) areyounormal 2009-09-26

  As I was reading I was thinking, 'Oh that bit's really funny, I'll mention that in the review' but then there were just too many to mention! Though, I must say the bit were Pete solemnly promises to get Patrick laid really stuck in my mind. I could really picture that happening. Oh and the bit where the magic sceptre bounced off the toilet and got Ryan, I like that too!! :D
  
  Really funny!! :D
  
  Sas x

  Author's response

  hahaha thanks :)
  
  Glad your liking it so far!
  
  And Ryan getting hit by the scepter was my absolute favorite part as well haha silly brendon....

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