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ok for one thing i understand gerard was hurt for what willow did to try an control him and also what jessica said and just his whole trust issue with women but he stil should not of done what he did to willow hes and asshole -.- but i like ur asshole gerards their always hot and you write them well.that whole thing with the mother is kind of intriguing(cant spell) maybe she doesnt wanna find her little girl i know that sounds harsh but i get the feeling shes not a very nice women and shes very selfish and obsessed with gee(arent we all tho LOL jk) but then i look at the little girl an im torn at her slight mind frame maybe shes playing naive and wanting to find her mother or maybe she brought mikey and all that back to get rid of her or something along those lines.
im alsowondering whats gunna happen with bob and all that he was a ickhead for telling bob where they were eating and as for gee at the end he was acting like a proper snob he shouldnt give two fucks about the press just aslong as his bro gets better,but then again i think everyone has that snobbish darkside which his compeltly sterotypical,racist and machonistic but yeah thats all i gotta say
great chapter loved it wanna kick gee in the balls but apart from that it rocked :)
(#) x_Charlie_x 2009-09-27Hmm, first poor Mikey. I'm thinking he wouldn't have seen that reaction coming a mile off and while he was completely thrown and confused he had Gerard bitching and moaning about the fact that the cleaners were there.
As for the Gerard-Willow thing. I can completely understand now why Gerard was so angry, I would be annoyed to think that someone would use a connection like theirs to try to control me, add in his already existing trust issues and it makes a lot of sense. I don't think Willow was completely in the wrong though, she was obviously taken aback when he explained to her so I think she probably didnt think it through from his point of view at the time.
As for the upcoming talk about their 'relationship'. I was a little surprised (and happy) that Gerard referred to it as a relationship because it sort of admits that it is deeper than friends having sex. I'm thinking he's not about to reveal his undying love though... for one he is still conciously keeping some things from her, often when he talks to her about things he makes a point to remain physical contact so she can't hear his thoughts and so she only knows exactly what he wants her to hear.
I think it'll be good for them though, Willow also needs to explain her feelings because she doesn't do a lot of talking either... but I hope she doesn't get her heartbroken.
As for Bob... I still think he's kind of an idiot but I'm sure he had his reasons...
Loved it!! Sorry for the huge review lol I just got a bit caught up in my thoughts! can't wait for more x
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-09-27ooooh ooooh ooooh!
what's gonna happen next?!
loving this story. Gerard seems to be accepting that Willow means more to him than just sex. poor Willow though, she really thinks from his point of you, it is just about the sex.
can not wait for more. many thanks!
(#) somethingorother 2009-09-27Bob is gonna get it, regardless of Gerard agreeing to not do or say anything to him.
I wonder what his version of their relationship is. At least he says he wants to trust her. That's definately a start. Hearing him say everyone that tells he they love him all lied must have crushed Willow, because her's is truthful.
I kind of hoping Willow will just help Mikey then leave Gee and see how everything will work out. I mean it will be terrible for her because she's in love with him but I'm interested in Gee's reaction. He's all over the place right now.
(#) xBlackHeartedAngelx 2009-09-28I do see why Gerard was worried about the cleaners been there.
Jessica's a bitch... enough said.
Gerard is getting better at the relasionship thing, I do see his point of why he's upset about being in another relasionship. Atleast he's saying he wants to trust her, ven though he said he will never trust another woman.
My concern now is Bob. Does he have a crush on Willow or does he count her as a sister and is only looking out for her. Either way I think there might be some disagrement from him and Gerard.
I love reading the story can't wait to find out what happens next.
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