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Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) DarQuing 2009-10-29
I think what I love most about this story is how you're developing the characters. Up until I think two or three chapters ago, Albus tended to be in the background. And gradually you've introduced him as a bit of an villain. He seems a bit more like an anti-villain at this point (feel free to look up the word :) ), but I think gradually we'll see that he's about as much of a villain as Riddle.
Please update soon! :DAuthor's response
Whether or not Albus is a villain is a matter of historical review- you'll have to judge once all the facts are in (end of sixth year). Holly's statement 'Your enemies aren't necessarily my enemies, Albus' does point out that Holly doesn't consider him one of the 'white hats'. Then again, she's a murderer (Quirrel, Flint, Sim-Holly).
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(#) big_johnson 2009-10-30
This is one of the most unique insights into the characters that I've read in this fandom. I like the characterizations and how you don't just make them one dimensional canon clones.Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) longreachjones 2009-10-30
Nice Babylon 5 reference, Zathras is pleased. :DHolly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) longreachjones 2009-10-30
Nice Babylon 5 reference, Zathras is pleased. :DAuthor's response
Zathras is also pleased, as is his brother, Zathras!
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(#) Faraqs 2009-10-30
Great story! Some of the best characterization I have seen in fandom. Hope life will permit you to finish this story, since otherwise would be an afront to all things holy. Hope you continue with the tangents as well. Aside from wanting to read the smut, they also give a better "whole" to the story.
More updates, please!Author's response
Thank you!
I post when their written, no beta, so you get them as quick as I can make them fit correctly. I am committed to finishing my story, though I can't say how long the whole enchilada will be. Every third chapter I post seems to extend the Outline futher- currently the Outline ends at 63, but that only affords a few chapters each for the last two years, so I can expect that number to rise. Stay tuned!
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(#) huntjd1 2016-01-25
I think that Holly's only acceptable response should be.
1 lay a trap using every bit of run lore she possesses.
2 Kill the Dursleys in such a way as to be sure to bring Professor Dumb running.
3 Spring the trap and make sure he cant escape.
4 cut off his winky and make him eat it.
5 use every method there is torture and mind rape him of every memory he has.
6 Obliviate his mind so there is nothing left. Use Imperio to make Aperate to the middle of an ocean somewhere where he will hopefully drown.
7 Go to Hogwarts and find every memory he has hidden and destroy them.
8 Destroy every portrait there.
9 Just to be thorough set the office ablaze using fiend fire.
10 go find Fudge and do the same to him.
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