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• My Dark Angel

  (#) GoddessFire 2010-04-13

  Ok seriously...this might be one of the most origanal stories I have read on this site! I really like it! I hope you continue! Xo ~Natalie

  Author's response

  Whoa, thanks :)
  I'll write another chapter soon :)
  Thanks for the review!
  Lu

• My Dark Angel

  (#) shortygirl 2010-04-13

  I agree with GoddessFire on this one. Very origanal.
  please update

  Author's response

  Thanks updating soon!
  Lu

• My Dark Angel

  (#) EvieSaunders 2010-04-14

  This blew. My. Fucking. Mind!
  It was so unique and so well written!
  I definitely want more!!
  Well done, Lu!
  This is truly one of the best things I have read in a while!
  
  xo
  - Evie

  Author's response

  haha!
  thank you :)
  Updating soon!
  and really? thanks!
  Thanks for the review,
  Lu

• My Dark Angel

  (#) wolf2008lllll 2010-04-14

  Well this will be referring back to your reply to my reviw on your other story; I might aswell say it now rather than on your next chapter to 'Art Of Love' ::: Omg yes, Orlando was amazing. It was so hot. It's been quite hot over here, but when I got back to Englad I felt like I was freezing- just wasnt used to being back. Ok- On to 'My Dark Angel'
  
  Ha, this is awesome. Seriously, It's written well, the chapter is long (not that that even matters ;) ) It's very detailed and expresive, and as everyone else has said- It is unique.
  I definantly want to read more, no doubt about it. Looks like I'm not the only one who likes it Referes to above comments.
  
  
  Ok so, I love the way you were switching between the two characters at the begining, that actaully made it more tense which was great. And the time skip was good aswell, you didnt need to waste time writing lots of unnecessary infomation so you missed it out and just aged everyone by a few years; that was done really effectivly- we had the basic idea about the alcohol adbuse with both characters, and Lucy's memory loss, without having to write too much, and leaving us wanting to know more about whats really been happeing.
  
  As much as I love 'The Art Of Love' I have to say, this is written alot better so far.
  Oh, and I get that problem too, I can't write a story with my name in it; it just dosen't feel right at all, lol.
  
  Well, I will add this to my favorites; and look out for an update.
  Can't wait!
  
  -----
  Storm x

  Author's response

  Glad you had fun in Orlando! I bet it was nice and warm! although I'm probs hate the sun, I have this weird thing about being in sunlight... lol.
  
  Thank you! I was worried people weren't gonna like it!
  
  And yeah, that too, this ones more 'grown up' than the others.
  
  and yes, its uncomfortable to have your name in your own story :S
  
  updating soon!
  
  thanks for the review.
  Lu

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